Like 2nd-person sensual and cute fun? Well, there's about five or six other authors you should probably go to first. If you've read all their works, however, then I'm your go-to guy. Also, watersports
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This story is a sequel to A Story in All of Us
(This fic is rated [Cheeky] by the rating scale of the Sensual Fiction General)
*Sequel to A Story in All of Us*
You and Fluttershy have taken things steady since your first romantic encounter, but you've found yourself wanting more of the pegasus. You get your wish, but not in a way you expect....
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Very nice, almost plays out like a scene in a visual novel. You play many of them? Ever consider writing one?
10080
Only visual novels I've played are non-romantic ones (Phoenix Wright, for instance), although I have been curious about that genre from time to time.
AWESOME!
Dawwwwww!
10083
For someone who has never played one you have a very strong grasp on how the scenes would play out.
You know... thoughts have been occurring to me. Do you have any experience with Python? There is a visual novel creation engine called Ren'Py that is VERY easy to use. Pretty much insert text, art and music if you want and bam, the whole thing does the rest.
Its freeware. LINKED http://www.renpy.org/
Phoenix Wright is, in its most basic form a visual novel, but it certainly does not have the nuances that a proper one does have. Most of the visual novels out there are in Japanese, but if you don't speak it don't worry. www.mangagamer.com has a bunch of them in English. If you really want to get a taste of a good one, and if you don't mind the porn aspects, I suggest Fate/Stay Night. You would have to find a copy on your own, but look for Mirror Moon, they do translations of Fate/Stay Night. If you want one without the porno, I would suggest Clannad or Air (Careful, the second one has a porn version and a non porn version).
Visual novels are much more complicated than they look, but your writing style is suited to writing the scenes very well.
tl;dr
-Visual novels are cool
-Your writing style would work well for them
-Ren'Py lets you make your own
Keep at it!
-MintJelly
A big fan!
Veery nice!
Well done.
...*is trying to think of words* but all that comes out is D'awwwwwwwwwwwww. <3 your ships man there so touching and well written. Thank you for sharing them with us :D
WTF...i clicked 5 stars. but it says i clicked 4.5 GAHHH FIMFIC Why u hate me....sorry man. :\ someone who wanted 2 give it a 4.5 give it a 5 and we'll call it even
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hey i haven't read the Clanned but i seen it as a show onDemand . i think it may not have everything in the story though
good story, i would like more of them to come
i'll give it 6 stars but theirs only 5
I hope that "You" pony feels better,
Trevor ALWAYS had a thing for Flutters...
Oh my gosh!
I was so caught up in reading this AMAZING story I forgot to rate it 5 stars!
41806
As does everyone
You knew what you were doing to her.
Lol. Do you know the extent of the wingboner analogy? just lol.
Also this needs another sequel. I also do not know how you get such vivid writing in your... writing. You are just great
yay the fun has been doubled!
whats the name of the story from the letter, the one with inkie and her baker coltfriend
ive been trying to figure it out for a while now, ive seen it b4 just cant remember the name
This is just magnificent; You should definitely consider making this a trilogy?
Maybe even more?
this is awsome dude
yep seqel just as epic
It comes across me as curious as to why I never favorited this over a year ago...but then I realized that the like and favorite systems weren't even on the site, rather being replaced by the "tracking" and star-rating system. So, craving some Fluttershy love, I have returned to do the right thing!
Hey, weird question:- are there uncensored versions of these stories? Because it seems in the places that have stars (*) might have been where clop scenes are. Not that it needs it as both this sequel and the original are amazing stories. Just if it has m rated versions of these stories I wouldn't mind reading them too.
How dare you! Fluttershy is precious, how could you not have a thing for her?