Like 2nd-person sensual and cute fun? Well, there's about five or six other authors you should probably go to first. If you've read all their works, however, then I'm your go-to guy. Also, watersports
This story is a sequel to The Way to a Unicorn's Heart
After working yourselves to the bone, you and Twilight head off to a weekend retreat at a ritzy resort. However, there may be another reason why this vacation is necessary....
*With thanks to Eights and N3uro for editing*
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I throughly enjoyed it and hope to see more from you in the future.
this was a fic that i thoroughly enjoyed timebomb
Fine I admit it I have a thing for twilight now
Wait, I didn't already have a thing for Twilight? What is this devilry?
I'm liking it so far. It's very sweet, and my face turns red every time something cute happens. Well-written and quite heart-warming. Keep it up.
Also, I've had a thing for Twilight since day one, but that's another story.
i'm wondering when you going to contienue with the pinky pie story
and
are you going to make more ship's for diffrent mare's like rarity, rainbow dash and applejack
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Who said I was going to continue with the Pinkie Pie story?
My creative process is similar to the game developer Valve. Basically, I only write whatever comes to me so long as I can flesh that idea out enough to make a coherent and unique story. As such, it may take me awhile to write a continuation because I may not have any idea of what to do next. It also means that I don't have a preference of which mare to use next. My next fic could just as easily star a character I haven't worked with yet, or it could be yet another sequel.
No matter what, one thing will remain constant: Nobody will know what I'm writing until I'm close to posting it. It's more fun that way.
I love you so much for making this story. My fantasies with Twilight coming true......
I think I would have a hard time talking to her though.
I love you so much now! My fantasy with going out with Twilight finally comes true!!!!
I always had a thing for Twilight but now it's bigger.....
Now I want to go to the movies with her.
I just read the extra scene...........
I want her NOW!!!!!!!!!
I will not lie my likings for Twilight Sparkle have been doubled!
"....and I've just reached the part where she dragged her unconscious lover all the way back to her home and vowed to nurse him back to health! Oh, I really don't know how that Lionheart does it! It's all so romantic!"
Obvious plug-in is obvious, trololol. (XD Sorry, couldn't resist! The Minstroll of Equestria has struck again!)
Now, onto chapter 2! 8D
~ Magical Trevor, Minstrel of Equestria
Wow, I'm a jerk, poisoning the other me... Then again, if I hadn't poisoned other me, then other me wouldn't have had such an awesome time with Flootarshai!
~ Magical Trevor, Minstrel of Equestria
Trevor admits that he's ALWAYS had a small thing for Twilight, yes, but it might be a bit more than that now... EXCELLENTLY written!
bravo i got a little mixed up in the middle mainly 'cus it's midnight and i started to fell asleep, i can only say good job i felt awkward at ALL the awkward parts, nice. i'm goin' to bed now, night ZzZzZ
I'll just leave this here...
http://explicit.ponyfictionarchive.net/viewstory.php?sid=463&warning=9
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Great, thanks for linking to another site. Looks as if I have even more literature to sift through.
It was a fun read, never thought I would read something of this sort are enjoy it.
GreAt story... Just like the original.
My favorite pairing will always and forever be FlutterTwi. Then SpikeBloom. And then RainbowPie. AppleDash. MacIvory*. MacTwi. And lastly, Rarijack.
*Ivory Scrolls, the mayor of Ponyville.
41878 so it's kinda like: if it gets me the girls ? sure! I'll poison myself! I'm afraid i must agree
119766 Pretty much. XD
i swear you're just trying out how much you can get away with under a teen label aren't you ?
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Well, I wrote this story with the Ponychan SFG rating scale in mind. This story would get a rating of [Cheeky], which includes overly massaging body parts and suggestive moaning. If you really wanna see how far I'm willing to go, check out the link posted a few comments up. That would receive a rating of [Whoa!], which is no longer allowed on Ponychan. I'm sure you can figure out why that's the case.
HEY! That line of your that mentions 'I now have a thing for Twilight Sparkle' I don't resent that because it is a truth!
Wooo, cloppy time! :P lol, I love your style.
gotta say this was epic for the seqel!
I dont like clop fics like at all but you wrote this so well i almost considered it.
bravo!
lol more spa twins. totally had a flashback to pokemon with the whole Nurse Joy and Officer Jenny thing.
i suggest you to add a link to "the really steamy part" in a stand-alone part. or to the author notes at the end of chapter preceding it.
120195 Fine, I confess wet mane Twilight, or any kind of Twilight is a fetish of mine. Geez, what next? Want me to confess to predator-prey fetish too? Or hoof massage? Or mane massage? Brushing fetish? And to think, I used to be normal, once.
Peace,
AuthorGenesis
Love this this story
it"s sweet, puts you into a situation that feels extremely realistic and it features the best pony 
After I read this, well now I only really read 2nd person stories, so bravado your a great writer.
Either the nerves grew used to the high temperature, or the nerves became so burned that you can't feel the pain anymore...
I'm confused.