• Member Since 5th Oct, 2011
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TimeBomb0


Like 2nd-person sensual and cute fun? Well, there's about five or six other authors you should probably go to first. If you've read all their works, however, then I'm your go-to guy. Also, watersports

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As the head chef of your own cafe in Ponyville, food has always been your one true passion. However, a certain purple unicorn may help you discover a new love....

Sequel to my fic here.

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Comments ( 24 )

Yep, that about sums me up.

This is fucking great.

Yay..first to watch u ^^ i loved ur last one now that i see this im so excited SHHHUUUSHHHH time to read *goes to the top* yes, i have just made a comment before reading :pinkiegasp:

^^ that was a nice short film in my head Great job :D

SANDVICH!

Sorry, couldn't help myself. This was good!

#6 · Oct 6th, 2011 · · ·

Props to you my friend, nice use of second-person.

Short, sweet, and now I'm hungry.

amazing 2nd person story & now i'm hungry for a sandwitch

The use of second-person (or is that second-pony?) is well-executed; it gives another dimension to the story, and the way it's written makes the reader feel as though they are there, intensifying the emotions.

Nicely done.

#9 · Oct 31st, 2011 · · ·

Reading this in second-person gives me a forever alone feeling.:raritycry:

The Gentlecolt Sneaker ? ಠ_ಠ

I approve :moustache:

The Author has now made Trevor want to try a Flower Sandwich, even though one knows that one won't like it... One hates and loves you at the same time...

I always had a fantasy to where I had a crush on the beautiful Twilight Sparkle, but I could never say it. Then after sometime, I got enough nerve to ask her out and she would say yes.
.................... And you made it come true.
I LOVE YOU MAN!!!!!!
A ROMANCE STORY WITH THE ADORKABLE TWILIGHT, TO WHERE I GOT TO FOLLOW MY FANTASY!!!!!
I can't thank you enough. :pinkiehappy: :yay:

That last sentence in every story about me having a thing for each pony...oh god it has me laughing. :rainbowlaugh:
and at the same time i find it to be true. :twilightblush:
your storys are awesome keep up the good work! :yay:

Cute.

fetish for twilight? so totally.

You: "Note: You now have a thing for flower sandwiches, thunderstorms, awkward first impressions, growling stomachs, and what else...oh right, Twilight Sparkle. Yep, that about covers it."
Me: Eeeyyup :eeyup:
-Glassed

This story seriously shot Twilight from mid rated out of the Mane 6 to top on my list of favorites (not that there is a huge gap between them all). :twilightsmile:

I haven't read it yet, but seeing how it's a Timebomb0 fic, dis gun b Gud:moustache:

excellent story, enjoyed every word of it!:twilightsheepish::twilightsmile:

*takes off glasses*
Sweet

*reads Description* THIS DESCRIBES MY OC PERFECTLY!! HOW DID I NOT FIND THIS EARLIER?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? YOU HAVE EARNED YOURSELF A FOLLOW, AND A FAVORITE! :moustache:

You my good sir, a genius. Seriously, this is my new favorite 2P story now buddy. :moustache:
We need to celebrate this glorious moment. And after the party, i'm ready for the sequel. :pinkiehappy: reactiongifs.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/02/EOD.gif

I have NOT read it yet but... it seems like a good Night-Time Story!

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