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New clop chapter, enjoy everypony!
970810 I'm liking this story more than i should (and In know this says draft, but there is a couple minor spelling mistakes)
I see the Stockholm syndrome is starting to take effect! Good work, nice chapter as always.
Well fucking done. I hope this dosn't piss you off too much (or at all, hopefully) but i have been using a fuck load of elements from here to write my own story(don't stress, it isn't even close to publishement. Well i gotta now 'cos meds are starting to fuck me uo too much. take care man
So short
Even so, it's a really well written clop and I can't wait to see what happens next.
I really really really really really tink you should get an editor or two. Maybe just recruit some from your fandom. The immersion would really benefit from not constantly stumbling over a grammar error.
Other than that, good chapter. Missed the clop, though the actual "action" was very slow this time around and Fluttershy was a little quick to give in, in my opinion. It is a bit of a jump from her last thoughts.
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I do have an editor, I just figure some people like the chapters as soon as possible. Which is why I mark them draft. My editor can take up to 2 weeks to fix the chapter for me.
If anyone else would be willing to edit let me know. But I would rather it only be sweeped by one editor at a time and then reposted before another editor looks at it. Otherwise I could end up with 2 versions of the chapter edited differently.
Next chapter is actually already nearly done. it will be up tomorrow.
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Oh, ok. I can see the problem. If you were to work with multiple editors, you maybe should just "use" (hurr hurr) them depending on when they have some spare time.
I think if you would just send it to the editor who is currently available (as in "NOW"), the editing should be done in a few hours, if they get right to it. That way, it would be much more efficient, especially since you never seem to have any logical fallacies in your story, just jumbled words and maybe messed up punctuation. This is actually pretty quick to correct.
Oh, you son of a - I JUST ATE, DAMN IT!
Carry on...
Eewwww.
I am disturbed. Yet aroused. Continue.
STOCKHOLM SYNDROME!
"She felt like she loved him."
IT BEGINS!
970810 I LOVE YOU!
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great, now stockholm syndrome
fave
IT BEGINS
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A lil' mistake there MysteryFluttershy *TO Was spelt wrong
2370881 Stockholm syndrome...
Seriously, I wish Flutters would get out. Maybe Redblood doesn't get a punishment (which he deserves), or maybe nobody gets free (Which I haven't read up to and seriously doubt.)
STOCKHOLM SYNDROME she is at least happier in this chapter
Good ol' Stockholm Syndrome.