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Ohh he is on the tip of a knife called your f**ked
I really wonder how this will end.
287938 Hey thank you for the feedback.
I have gone back over this and edited it multiple times, the next time I do I will take your comments into account. I think I am getting better as I keep writing. I am am only willing to be bothered changing the earlier chapters so much. Please read my newer ones, chapter 7 and 8 do not contain clop and are where I actual try to write some real plot...
as in story. I hope I succeeded.
Needs more rape. And Satanism.
omg i cnt w8 :D
I THIS!
btw hope u read my comment. ;)
Sincerely:
RedBlood
288160
Comment read and I look forward to you ideas. I'm writing right now, maybe you can influence me.
288167Sure.
BTW if you're annoyed by these long paragraphs its because i got a crack on my screen.
But yeah.
Imma pm. If i can
Sincerely
RedBlood
288089 More rape next chapter.
I want to read about fucking Fluttershy, very good stroy after all
Hah, you could practically hear him shouting "oh BALLS" in his head.
Lying to the Element of Honesty... not a good plan there, fella.
So since further clopping is out of the question ( ) we may at least see Redblood getting his flank handed to him ( ).
Looking forward for more, you are doing an excellent job here!
288190 YAY!!!
It had better end with this fucker dead and Fluttershy free.
But, yeah.
288089 dafuq
Zebrica?
"'Here ya go, there free,...'"
"they're" not "there"
ok i keep call'in redblood blueblood and what is applejack a lie detector
Wait wait wait if the lemons are for aj's family only then how could his dead grandmother taste em
Answer: she couldn't 1 she's made up 2 the only for applejack's family and she couldn't have been a friend she would've mentioned him so my question is; why did applejack believe him?
288167 rape: when someone does something you don't want them to do
So clearly this isn't rape because fluttershy enjoys it and she wants him to do it to her
He is a terrible liar.
1. His grandmother could not have tasted lemons that were held in reserve for the apple family
2. He was raised in Zebrica by zebras so there is little chance of him knowing his pony family lineage. ( unless the dead grandma is actually a zebra, which, as is evidenced by the case of Zecora, is very unlikely.
3. Assuming he is from Zebrica, why did he travel to the Equestrian countryside simply for the peace and quiet.
4. In his attempts to look innocent, he acts strange enough that others would suspect of something wrong about him.
In other words, he is one dumb equine.