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I've been waiting since the start for an explanation as to why Fluttershy wasn't just using 'the stare' to help her escape. Yay!
I don't know why I read this, because I usually can't stomach this stuff and it makes me sick, but I have to ask, what is it in this story that compels me to stick and finish this to the very end? What I ask? WHAT?
I hope Redblood will get his in the end for treating Fluttershy like this.
294392 Why? Fluttershy get's free room, board and all the sex she could ever want. That spoiled bitch should be gratfull. And even the way she tryed to escape? Redblood should have fucking killed that rabbit and force-fed it to her. I hope Redblood gets away with this scott-fucking-free and Fluttershy never leaves.
Great story!
I see your still getting that!
Well now, this is a very enticing story, I love the plot behind it all and the entire idea of it, I am a fan of clop fics, for the sole purpose of the amount of detail which the writers usez, I can imagine it all so vividly, the way that you describe everything is amazing, please do keep writing these, as they are fantastic reads, I am sure some people don't like it because it's a clop fic, but I doubt they actually read it, this is amazing.
One thing though, this is seeming like a story that SHOULD have a bad ending, either she gets rescued but he then locks them all in a cage, or she is rescued but wants to stay with him. Maybe even she never gets caught, that's the way it seems to be going for me, I will love it no matter what you do, but that's all I wanted to say, again however, please keep writting these and well done, brilliant read, I put them all on my Kindle and read them on the bus today :D
294449 just why? What could compel you to say this even redblood is more noble then the filth and bile you are spouting forth. Yes I know that this means nothing to you and I swear if you never answer we can leave it at this but just stop to think what if you ,for example, had someone you cared for beyond what you thought was possible and she/or he suddenly vanished and was subjected to what you are wanting? Would you take what she's taking right now? Yet think before you speak if nothing else the internet is for free expression but that doesn't mean that you should try to be as insensibly obscene as possible.
you sir are slowly twisting my heart apart. I hope to god you have a good ending or I will die from depression... RIGHT AFTER I RIP OUT AND EAT YOUR PANCREAS AND PISS ON YOUR INTES- sorry I don't know what came over me there...
294449 Dude, I only have this to say... You make me sick
If nothing else, the frequency at which you pour out these chapters is amazing, if not outright astonishing. It really makes this fic something to look forward to when I get home from university. Still, it would make for a much more interesting read if you wrote longer chapters, say, in the realm of 4k words. This way, you could get more development going and would not need to focus on just one event, creating a more fluent transition instead of the rather jarring ones you have now, where each chapter is clearly seperated from the next. If they were a bit longer, it would not matter so much.
Just a recommendation, I will keep reading nonetheless, of course
294836 I would not feel bad in the slightest, Redblood is a saint who is doing a most noble and holy deed that Lord Satan is shurly smiling upon. And Fluttershy is a filthy heretic to the holyness that is Satan so she desearves this. Redblood was even giving her her choice of meals untill she had to e a spoiled little whore and try to get him in trouble. The only thing i'm mad at Redblood for doing is not sharing Fluttershy with me.
CANT...GET...ENOUGH.....
>>mrhappyface You might want to reconsider who you worship, for your own sake. Satan does not care about you or anyone, only himself. Sure, he'll give you whatever earthly desire you could possibly want, but in the end he'll take something much, much greater. Be it some earthly pleasure you would not want to see lost, or your very soul. But once your blood has soaked his contract, you're his bitch, a slave...just like in this scenario. If our cold-blooded antagonist really is a spawn of the Devil's work, then 'tis only natural that his very soul will be crushed along with his very flesh. I know...Satan gave me the ability to exact dark justice on all that I hate...in return I gave him my very humanity. My friend...you know nothing of Satan...
294960 then we need a paladin here. I'd recomend Big Macintosh.
294960 the way you talk reminds me of a mixture between the professor from futurama and Joseph Stalin. Still it is funny all the same
Have any of you actually read any of mrhappyface's fics? His stuff is much worse than this...
294392
I agree with you buddy.
294449 OHHHHHHH SHNAP!!!!
The stare works on DRAGONS, but Not PONIES!?.......EZ NOT POSSIBLE!
I was hoping Fluttershy would kick him in the balls and beat the shit out of him when she got out of the cage, that would have been hilarious!
didnt red blood have knifes and sharp stuff in that room? Flutter shy you dumbass.,.
This is surprisingly mellow compared to some stories I've read...
WHY?!?! poor Fluttershy! At least she got Angel but she can't eat whatever and this story has to be read all the way I'm sorry
294449
Your an idiot that's probably the life you would like to live HOW BOUT YOU TRY BEING A SLAVE DOUCHE!!!!
Umm, what does she do about going to the toilet? I'm surprised it hasn't been mentioned yet :/
5269380 I second that
What she needed was either ants, or a chameleon