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Right after the last chapter? Score! :D
Hey guys. I am very happy with the support this story is getting and it has helped motivate me to work on the story faster. Without request I have had ponies offering to proofread and I am very flattered by this.
If anyone would be interested, may I request a cover picture for the story? The one I am currently using I randomly found on Google image search. But it would be awesome to have one that represents a scene from the story. Please send me any submissions and it may become the cover pic for the story. Any rejected submissions I will also show off somehow.
Requirements:
- The cover may not in itself be explicit (no exposed genitalia, fluid or gore) But may show bondage or pretty much anything else.
- Must have the title "My Little Slave" written on it. The more interesting and appropriate the font, the better.
- Try to make it show accurate art.
- Has to exclusively involve Fluttershy.
Thank you everypony.
Wow...it really sucks to be fluttershy...
522603 What if... nah... the author wouldn't...
522586 Would you?!
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I would
522818 What I was implying was that in the end of this work of art, Fluttershy would be saved but would also have gained more sexual want and appeal. So, as you would gather from my efforts of 'schooling' you on the matter, Fluttershy in other words would be a 'Rarity', or 'Whore'.
522586 If I am hereby correct about you're goals my fellow writer, then please, do so in the funniest and most awkward way possible. It would 'Make my day' so to speak. Now, good work on the story so far and I hope to see more of this in the future. Good luck, and as always, have fun!
Hey Dude its me, ImmaSpikez.
I got banned so, I got another account
[youtube=MlaiBrdTKvM]
Im sorry for hugeness but i want to ;'D
Great story (even though i feel sorry for fluttershy), you can keep writting as far as i'm concerned, i've been following this story since chaper one and it's actually getting better and better with each chapter. I've gotta ask though, is there a happy ending for fluttershy? and will she be (ball)gagged in any future punishments.
As much as I am enjoying this, I want Fluttershy to be rescued. She's too good a pony to be trapped as someone's sex slave forever, plus Princess Celestia will probably step in to help find her; after all, she is one of the Elements of Harmony.
That said, clop clop clop.
You never fail to surprise me.
Why the fuck am I still reading this?
522558 Shouldn't you be spending 'quality time' with Cadence? not reading this? :P
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Maybe Shining Armor likes his porn.
But seriously that's one hot pony wife you have.
528285 She's here with me. We 'read' together.
528318 Yes and yes,
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I think it's obvious that I'm not giving anyone any spoilers.
changeling approved
"But she was holding on to him for dear life and his withdraw was resisted by mouth muscles that seem to gain superpony strength."
Pfhahahahahahaha XD
Oh god. That line.
You know you've actually gotten worse since you started? You should just give up, seriously. Look up an author on FiMfiction called 'Come Hither.' He doesn't write Fluttershy so you probably won't get hard from his stories, but they'll give you an idea of what clop should read like.
Honestly though, that line. You know the saying 'write what you know?' Well, just goes to show that you should definitely wait with writing sex until you've lost your virginity, yeah?
Gahhh, I'm gonna blow his head all ova four counties!
533984 Why? She's a women. She dosn't have any rights to begin with.
Ok, so where do I start with this one? First of all, let's talk about what this story is. I personally wouldn't call this a clopfic as much as it is a physiological thriller, but yeah, the constant pony sex puts the clop title on it, so no arguing there. But I'm gonna look at it as a thriller. and on that note, you have done a relatively good job with making one. the torture you've put Fluttershy through is really terrifying, and I really think the battle between her submission and her freedom is quite interesting. the reader already cares about Fluttershy from the beginning, but what you've forced her through has put me through a state of horror and sympathy when something goes wrong for her. I also find myself really caring about her friends finally saving her, hoping that they can do something for her.
That being said....
You've dropped the ball on one major aspect of the story......Redblood is an atrociously written character. his motives are more inexplicably vague than dramatically ambiguous, seeing that he says he loves Fluttershy, but is attempting to break her down to a mindless sex toy. You've set up that there is more to him, we should have gotten some real development by chapter 16. and while we're on the subject, do you realize how fucking stupid this character is? he's been studying Fluttershy for what, months now? how could he possibly think he'd be fine if he went to get Fluttershy's favorite food from her best friends? and I could have forgiven that. I really could have. HOWEVER-you made it so that the dumbass almost chokes eating Fluttershy out. That my friend, is the sign of a MOTHER FUCKING IDIOT.
But you know what? I'm still addicted besides that. you know why? I want to see Redblood get his ass beaten, wrecked and burned for this shit, right next to Rari-er, the unicorn who is helping him. because you've done that the best so far. You have made the audience care. You have made us want to see Fluttershy get through this, make us want to see that she'll survive, that she will see her friends once again. That, good sir, has been done spectacularly. I look forward to the next chapter of your tale, and hope you'll avoid a tragic ending and opt for the happy one that should be used. cus if not....
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Thanks for the detailed feedback.
Great story, VERY clopable to. haha more please :) ?
522586 oh my god this is just awful.... Make more plz
Please please please please PLEASE give this a happy ending!!!!!
inb4 Fluttershy turns out to be a changling, and suddenly everything in this story is okay
An almost ironic death? Were you actually listening to me, sir? It may not be in my terms exactly, but it's pretty damn close. I did find the last few chapters hate-arousing, however, more is needed to fuel the vengeance I seek, sir.
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Whatever can satisfy your need for revenge, sir. I did say keep it up until such and such, didn't I? The only limit might be that he passes out from the pain, but simply use a bucket of cold water, and he shall awaken, sir.
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Have you read my section from my so-called "EBecK's Vengeance Guide." Perhaps that shall fuel your mind with the satisfactory vengeance until we see what lies in store for our despise devil. Perhaps I should call Darkbright Occolt and have him use his Fear Monger spell? Only time shall tell I, I presume.
I love this story and I love you; The Mystery Fluttershy Fan!
If I have the time I may try my hand at some cover art but I'm very busy at the moment...
The story so far up to chapter 16 has been proofread and updated. Enjoy.
I've removed the draft tags.
More chapters should be coming this weekend.
When is next chapter?! Its been AGES
ok, shoot me... but the Latex part is my favorite
and I am direly awaiting the next parts
Somepony did a pretty funny reading of the first chapter.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=utMSJ6puCfw
dude this fanfic is awesome and you must finish it and submit the rest so i can read it.
since the first few chapters this fic has gotten better well ima read it till the end now.
when is the next chapter comeing out
I don't even know when the next chapter will come out. Depends when I feel like writing. Thank you all for your support though and I take nagging as a compliment.
Someone has done a reading on the 2nd, 3rd and 4th chapters now.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ccBArYPDhlY&feature=plcp
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GVzI2gjMl3M&feature=plcp
eu3.memecdn.com/when-you-see-pictures-of-your-friends-hanging-out-and-you-werent-invited_o_345314.gif hehe....
I want you to know, I stayed up all night reading this. I'm addicted to your work.
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I appreciate it. I will write more as soon as I feel inspired.
Wow. This is the first fic I've seen (haven't read yet) that people really seem to like that involves the elements of a great boner (Pardon my language)
i love this story but you need to make sure it has a happy ending
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Please hurry up and write more... I honestly am into it for the latex constriction...
I can't believe it. I'm actually reading a clopfic. You actually made the story so good that I am willing to see past the sex scenes for the story,
More!!! Now!!!!
MORE FLUTTERRAPE NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I know that you might be discouraged by the haters, but do it for the people that love this story... haters gonna hate
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Ah, another one. I was beginning to think such a task had taking a long rest, still, it's good to know that some folks wish my analysis. Allow me, would you kindly?
XtremelyXtreme....rather simplistic to the average eye, and in such, give a shory analysis. However, I believe I see more, for the eyes I bear are not average.
Xtremely-an adverb, although the correct spelling is "extremely" the use of putting the X at front would suggest that you favor looking cool and appealing to the eye, both namewise AND OCwise, hence the dual-scythe cutie mark. The adjective itself would describe you as "extreme" meaning one who goes beyond the limits of simple comprehension.
Xtreme-an adjective, though it bears similar meaning of being at a state of being beyond mere comprehension. It too is spelle with X at front, thus suggesting the favorable appeal once more, yet doubling that. Furthermore, the OC itself is called Scythe, named after a weapon of death, which suggests an add-on to the X-factor of cool.
In short; you favor looking cool and appealing to the eye, yet intimidating to those who oppose you by coming off as a kind of badass type that goes beyond comprehension, or sense. You also seem to enjoy "extreme" action that involves pulling off manuevers that are rather complex. Plus...the X makes things look cool, as it is unwritten. I do so favor confidence in one's self, if folks don't like that, then they should simply keep away, for as I said; it goes beyond their comprehension and understanding.
Hopefully I didn't grow rusty, so tell me; have I fulfilled your desire?
528412ha!