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I kinda liked the idea, of a barb fanfiction harem.. but seriously, with that description i dont even want to read it...
Edit: Yeah i couldnt pass from the first chapter... STOP USING EXCLAMATION MARKS! D:
Barb is r63 of Spike right?
2992023 Yes, why? DO YOU THINK IT'S WIERD!? BECAUSE I'LL GRAB BY THE TAIL, THEN SLAM YOU ON THE WALL, THE FLOOR, MY SISTER'S FACE, MY PARENT'S SMART CA....Oh, sorry, that was a rude outburst. Ignore what I had just said about slamming you against stuff!
Seems decent but a little rushed. But, I will keeps reading because have got my interest!
No matter what gender ge is spike gets all the bitches
2992066 xDimages.wikia.com/mlp/images/7/75/Spike_and_Rainbow_Dash_laughing_together_S1E01.png Ya am cool with it
2992198 Yes, perfect, Spike still has swag even if it's a genderbent story. I originally wrote this story so people could do more Barb shipping with other R63 characters!
the permits is good as always but the grammar and writing is http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9a8r7xQvS1g
2992530 Okay, after seeing that video, your comment kind of hurt a little!
Jesus fuck, those first two chapters were goddamn terrible. I like the premise, but the execution is sloppy and lacking in both detail and sexiness.
2992538 sorry but the truth stings you have great ideas but you don't pull it off well it like asking Albert Einstein to play football he has a great mind for strategy but cant play well and preform the play with skill
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To be fair to Trahzo, your grammar and spelling are pretty abysmal, too.
2992698 You sound like one of my friends who say that I'm not that good at Yugioh!
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I'm terrible at Yu-Gi-Oh.
WTF!!!
2992998 Okay! Berry Pinch, attack!
R63
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Ok I have yet to read the story yet but you should listen to the people who are trying to help you. If your grammar is bad, fix it. If you want I can read through it later and point out all the mistakes but not this moment, I just got home from a long car ride and I'm tired.
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so rushed. to many exclamation ponits.
but i somehow like it.
i laughed dont know why but did.
Exactyl>>2992526
2992526 Thats actually an excelent reason to write the fan fiction, but you should seriously improve or get a proofreader and editor, this could be a really good work if you want it.
So... Kirins have two dicks?
2998466 Ah, I've been wondering when I'd finally one day run into you! Yes, I guess they do since Dragons usually 2!
I may be wrong but isn't Pinkie Pie's unofficial gender bend name Berry Bubble instead of Bubble Berry and isn't Applejack called the same no matter the gender? will continue reading at a later time.
3005743 No, it's Bubble Berry & also, I'm doing Apple Juice, because It's very confusing when I use Applejack!
I'm surprised you didn't comment on Butterscotch opening Barb's clam and polishing her pearl.
I guess you could say barb -puts on badass sunglasses- choked his chicken!
So... She married a dictionary, a chicken, 2 cowboys, a speed-racer, a crazy psychic, a fashion designer, a coward, and an egghead... And this was all narrated by Epic Fail? ... I see nothing wrong with this. XD
3026582 Yeah, Epic Fail, you know, the R63 Derpy, at least that's what I think the name should be.
3026534 YEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAH!!!
Girls dont have prostates
So fucking badly written that I couldn't finished the first chapter. Which sucks because you dont see many Spines stories (I hate the name Barb makes me think of someone much older)
Really? This is not a chat room.
2992066 Dude... JUST WTF IS THIS?
You are better then this dude...
Im gonna be butthurt for about 14 hours now.
FUCKING R63Don't like the idea of spike being banged by 9 guys.2998466 all dragons/reptiles do its called a hema dick
3017179 you cheeky devil how did I know I would find the likes of my fav author here
What the fuck...no seriously, what the fuck?!....
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UPVOTE!
I just read this and I have one thing to say......
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My god. This grammar is atrocious. I barely understood what was happening.
Ok. The concept of this story is rather interesting, but there is SOOOO much that you need to fix.
Your grammar, your spelling, the story and chapters are rushed way too much, your misuse of certain words needs to be fixed. But other than that, it would've been good. Concept is good, but you need to not rush it
terrible but I like it
so much potential such a waste
yep...the most fucked up wedding ever...i would have bannished crown and fork to the moon anyways.
I can't wait for this fantastic LUL ride, this might as well be a Comedy!
Not as many LULZ so... Meh.
The most LULZ, especially with the 4th wall bulldozing!
That authors note! X3 XD
Spongebob is pathetic indeed. And that moment when the parents cry tears of joy for having their son kicked out, talk about tough parents.
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What kind of grammar were you tought?