Barb, I'm Sorry!

After Blitz's B-day party, he said things that should never have been said and now has to apologize to Barb! It sounds easy doesn't it? Have you ever tried to make-up with a dragon? I didn't think so!

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Ch.1: Drunken Mistake! · 19th Jul 2014 · 483 words
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Ch.2: Please, I'm Sorry! · 19th Jul 2014 · 1,156 words
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Author of MADness

Author of MADness #1 · Jul 20th, 2014 · · · Ch.2: Please, I'm Sorry! ·

........hmmmmmmmm

beirirangu

beirirangu #2 · Jul 20th, 2014 · · · Ch.2: Please, I'm Sorry! ·

for a moment, I almost thought it was a response to a recent series of adult pictures featuring those two

Cobolt Soundwave

Cobolt Soundwave #3 · Jul 20th, 2014 · · · Ch.2: Please, I'm Sorry! ·

That ending really threw me off. I was expecting a full on Barb and Blitz beatdown to happen.

ShotgunNeko

ShotgunNeko #4 · Jul 20th, 2014 · 2 · 5 · Ch.2: Please, I'm Sorry! ·

Flickercoy? spatflame? Apple juice? ugh no...lol u have a good concept...but The bad grammar takes away from the story..also u lost me when barb used the word faggot....cuz that's like using the n-word....u just don't do it lol

TheBlackKirin

TheBlackKirin #5 · Jul 20th, 2014 · · · Ch.1: Drunken Mistake! ·

Sorry to bring this up, but is flickercoy, fluttershy?
Cause if he is, the name he has is apparently butterscotch, to the rule63 community. Just saying that now.

trahzo

trahzo #6 · Jul 20th, 2014 · · · Ch.2: Please, I'm Sorry! ·

4721418 I was just using Inuyuru's idea for an R63 name, what? Do you think I'm some sort of idiot who doesn't know it's Butterscotch? Don't you guys read the author's notes?

TheBlackKirin

TheBlackKirin #7 · Jul 20th, 2014 · · · Ch.2: Please, I'm Sorry! ·

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Well considering his history of being a fellow nintendo fan. I thought he was gonna do the right thing, maybe even save her later, and get Bulls*it.
EX
Mario
Link
Sonic(Though his is by choice)
Donkey Kong
Luigi( We all know why)
All playable characters in pocket monsters, who have either opposite or sae sex friends
Just the ones i can name off the top of my head.

Cobolt Soundwave

Cobolt Soundwave #8 · Jul 20th, 2014 · · · Ch.2: Please, I'm Sorry! ·

Okay there really is no need for a full on war I'm the comments now is there? -_-

ShimmerShine

ShimmerShine #9 · Jul 20th, 2014 · · · Ch.2: Please, I'm Sorry! ·

Okay, I think the plot line is awesome it's just the use of exclamation points is absolutely ridiculous and there's a bit of a gap in timing. Maybe a little bit of calmer tones would make it better.

Lord Olympius