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This needs a sequel or an extended version
Needs more words, it feels like you didn't try for anything more than that.
Okay. This was a nice little clop.
More clops of Spike and a mare he slept with!!!
Not bad all things considering. It's about time someone did Spike with Berry Punch.
3450895 I kinda thinking about it but I'm still writing on my other story because I wrote this one because i was bored and couldn't sleep at night.
3451082 3451601 thanx
pls can make one more chapter i want to see twilights reaction when she ups stairs
Makes me want to see more stories with this pairing. Pretty sweet fic!
3459792 thanx
Well, first times I've seen this pairing, and it's not too bad for your first shot at this. My suggestion would be a bit of proof reading and a bit of better pacing, but for your first clop, I've definately seen worse
3461777 thanx... I guess?
3451601 CELESTIA IS THERE TOO
DOOOOOM>>3452031
its a clop fic so... 10/10
Twilight the dragon slayer. haha, I cracked up at this.
I petsonaly think it could be longer but other the that it was great
could have sworn i've read this before....
spike is so screwed
I agree in fucking full as well as WTF just happened?
I,m screwed
Where did Berry went?
I wouldn't called this a romance fic, just a clop fic.