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themysteriousbrony2013


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This needs a sequel or an extended version :pinkiehappy:

Needs more words, it feels like you didn't try for anything more than that.

Okay. This was a nice little clop.

More clops of Spike and a mare he slept with!!!

Not bad all things considering.:twilightsmile: It's about time someone did Spike with Berry Punch.:moustache:

3450895 I kinda thinking about it but I'm still writing on my other story because I wrote this one because i was bored and couldn't sleep at night.

pls can make one more chapter i want to see twilights reaction when she ups stairs:twilightsmile:

Makes me want to see more stories with this pairing. Pretty sweet fic! :twilightblush:

Well, first times I've seen this pairing, and it's not too bad for your first shot at this. My suggestion would be a bit of proof reading and a bit of better pacing, but for your first clop, I've definately seen worse

3451601 CELESTIA IS THERE TOO
DOOOOOM>>3452031

its a clop fic so... 10/10

Twilight the dragon slayer. haha, I cracked up at this.

I petsonaly think it could be longer but other the that it was great

could have sworn i've read this before....

spike is so screwed

'' Well guess Twilight's gonna be the first dragon slayer, cause Twilight's gonna kill me''

I agree in fucking full as well as WTF just happened?

:moustache:I,m screwed

Where did Berry went?

I wouldn't called this a romance fic, just a clop fic.

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