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The whole of Ponyville is eagerly awaiting the wedding of the year. After overcoming much hardship and fighting numerous battles Private and Twilight finally set to bring themselves together in holy matrimony. As the wedding comes ever closer both ponies begin to examine themselves. Will either of them have the courage to say the words that will bind them forever? I Do.

(An epilogue to season 1)

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Nice to see the wedding story up, have to say Cadence and her attempts to meddle are what I really liked in this chapter and it seems her daughter is following in her hoofsteps.

part one?! r u kidding me?! that being said, both funny and beautiful work...

MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE!!! GET MARRIED!! SAY I DO ALREADY!!! *is still channeling Cadence*

There's been one question wracking my mind...how do you make all these title pages?! They're fantastic!

2931759 Is it wrong to want Cadence's (and I guess Skyla's) spell to backfire? Like, what if the spell itself worked as it normally would, but the moment it wore off on an arguing unicorn couple they each accused the other of seducing him/her with magic, ultimately making things worse between them? Cadence would no doubt rethink her trolling habits, but it would be funny (in a sad way) to see that happen.

Huzzah! Wedding stories for the win! That is all.
Write faster damn it!
Okay that is all :scootangel::pinkiehappy:

Oh...my...gosh...
My eyes glowed. “That is so CUTE!” I cheered happily. “Oh my gosh the love was just so pure and innocent!”
Rarity giggled, “Oh it is simply precious is it not?”
Must...resist...urge...to...meddle...

Must...resist...urge....

Cadence: MY SHIPPER SENSES ARE TINGLING!

This isn’t an ulterior motive to also coach him about Scootaloo at all. I swear!

Riiiiiiiight...

I really love (no pun intended) Cadence in this one.

2931853I don't make them, that's all Skullman's work

great start to the story cant wait for the next chapter. :twilightsmile::eeyup::yay:

Why the dislikes?

2935240 Indeed, usually there's only about one!

2935240 Someone's trolling your story....

2935240

Some people see OC shipped with mane six and instantly dislike. I'm sure none of the dislikes are from those who have been following the story!

Great chapter cant wait for more to come.:eeyup::twilightsmile::yay::heart:

So. Many. D'awwwwws

:ajsleepy: I was kinda hoping Adamus might show up at some point to try and ruin things only to get his keister kicked gloriously. Oh well, a guy can hope.

2940623After the failed stunt he tried to pull with Twilight's crown, he ain't gonna show his face in public for a while.

:raritycry: (I always cry at wedding)

Another Great chapter. :eeyup: :twilightsmile: :yay:

OVERLOAD OF FEELS!!!!

Well done!!!

Now for the first month as husband and wife.....let's conveniently skip the next 2 weeks, since there's gonna be quite a bit of R-rated stuff that starts with the reception......if my last wedding was anything similar, a lot of ponies are gonna get laid......including Private and Twilight :twilightsheepish:

.....So let's go on past the honeymoon and get to the first month in their home as husband and wife, and maybe that could be the moment when Twilight announces to Private that little Twilight Twinkle is coming.....that would be the perfect end for this wonderful season 1, and an excellent start to season 2!!!!:raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry:

And artists, we really need a good image of Princess Twilight in her wedding dress!! Please??

2942342It's going to be a bit, but suffice to say Twinkle will come

A enjoyable chapter and as always Cadence always finds a way to make me laugh through her teasing.

This was a great chapter with a beautiful wedding, really nice for this to finally happen.

Since you mentioned Nyx in the series. I have wondered how "Past sins" would have played out if Private was there and Twilight was an Alicorn. Hmmm... I just might have to write that one day.

:pinkiegasp: Whoa... I didn't know Fluttershy had it in her to do that... AWESOME! :rainbowlaugh:

There finally married! They have finally married! WOOOOO!

I read the little tag. “Do not open until the honeymoon?”
“Yes darling, suffice to say it’ll all make sense then,” Rarity said, a rather mischievous smirk gracing her face.

If you know what I mean... :raritywink:

“Should anypony have any reason for these two not to be joined in glorious matrimony... They can take it up with me, and they will be enjoying new digs on the moon,” Celestia said with a very impish grin, obviously joking. The audience chuckled. Twilight, and I did, too.

Best part.

This was simply fantastic.

They finally tied the knot! Woooo!!!

:fluttershysad::pinkiesad2::applecry: Beautiful. What there's something in my eye.

A Fantastic ending to the series I cant wait for season 2. :eeyup::twilightsmile::yay:

Tears were shed...a lot of them...not manly tears either. That was a beautiful ending to a fantastic season.
Can't wait for season 2! Excellent job!

I LOVE THIS SERIES SO FREAKIN MUCH!!!!:flutterrage:
Can't wait for season 2

All my feels!!!! :fluttercry:
This really hit home, you did it again!
I can't wait for the next season!

Really nice chapter and overall a wonderful story to end Season 1.

I won't lie, when Big Mac started singing to Fluttershy I had the warmest feeling in my heart. Even more so when Twilight and Private started dancing.

This was beautiful, in every sense of the word. I cannot wait to see what you have in store for Season 2.

Yyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeaaaaaahhhh Booyyeeee!!

Aww, they didn't save the top layer! There's an old tradition that you save the top layer for your first anniversary for good luck. My mom did, and it was just as delicious as it was on her wedding day.

Mmm, so good...

ANYWAY, good job with everything you've done. I wish I could stick by a story as long as you have, and I hope to see season 2 start up soon. This is one of those stories that makes me keep coming back for the characters more than the story.

Oh, forgot the second half of the tradition. "Or at the christening of their first child. Whichever came first."

Brilliant ending! Looking forward to season two!!

FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU it's over.. Well at least season one is. What am I to read for the next week?

So many feels, I'm going to die.

I can say, this story has it's great moments. The best moment in this was where Tailspin met his grandmother for the first time, :pinkiesad2: That was... feel worthy to see the reunion. I can say for a fact that I am a bit excited yet disappointed to see this end, but that doesn't mean that I want it to actually end yet. :pinkiehappy: Now it's time for me to wait for the next season and say hello to new characters, new cases, and possibly a new team to solve them... Though now I wonder... Is it possible that Tailspin could solve a case himself? :rainbowhuh: Ahh never mind, just my random thoughts...

Private mustn't be afraid of Shining, he should worry about Celestia. What was it again she told him in that one letter? "If you think of breaking Twilights heart again... let's just say there is plenty of space on the moon!" Definitely worse than Shining!

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