All was peaceful in Ponyville. Private's friend Big Macintosh was going to marry the love of his life Fluttershy. But right after the couple make it official, a mysterious pony interupts the ceremony. Private fails to save his friends from the hoof of this evil pony. Now Private is forced to play the game of Shadowhoof. If he doesn't solve five mysteries before time runs out, Private will lose his friends. Just who is Shadowhoof? What does he want with Private? Above all, will Private be able to stop him?
Chapters (7)
The extremity of the first chapter...(whisper) Epic.
Welp, whoever gets in his way is probabbly doomed now.
OH SHIT!
He.... he ruined Big Mac's wedding.... HE EFFIN RUINED BIG MAC'S WEDDING!!!! *loads shotgun*
<does best Bugs Bunny impersonation> of course, u realize, this means WAR,
New headcanon: Fluttershy's dad is Sgt. Slaughter.
This story,,,holy shit I am ready for the next chapter. Stupendously done good sir. Also, "Her voice may have been soft, but it was no less convinced this is what she wanted. Her Mackey." That is the sweetest freaking line I have ever heard before. Well played.
3268000 I was thinking R. Lee Emory...
And shadow hoof finnaly revels himself to Private... Sortof, didn't really say who he was to him, but ahh well. now, lets see where these 'games' lead to.
Get that shotgun ready Granny Smith!
War.....I like war....
Damn, Shadowhoof definitely knows how to make a statement and an entrance.
This guy is going to regret screwing with Private and do I smell a Holmes/Moriarty relationship here?
3275289That was the point of Shadowhoof's creation
3275320 Sweet. That rivalry is one of my favorite fiction fights right in front of the Venom/Spider-man rivalry.
"The game Begins, a pawn is moved."
It's like Batman and The Riddler or Joker.
Either that, or you're taking inspiration from Die Hard 3.
Forrest Gump and Avatar's cabbage guy?
Nice
3276295 What movie is that from?
3278449
'Forrest Gump' Really Good
Loving it so far. Keep up the awesome work :)
Good chapter, I think my favourite part might have been Private's attempt at swinging across the street.
I'm definitely getting some "Sherlock" vibes from this one and I loved the "Forrest Gump" reference. Outstanding!
"The black rook has fallen, the white king is safe."
This mother-bucker isn't pulling any punches I mean Jayzeeus!
That filly still unnerves me when she shows up, can't even imagine what else Shadowhoof has in mind.
You and me both, Private.
Clown are scary.
Hmmmmm....
Scarlet...
dafuq...
Definately loving where this story is shaping too
took me two days but I finally finished all your stories,
can't wait for the next chapters!
Sadly it's making me go all jittery, having to wait for each chapter to come out
Anyway~ I love all your stories, love the suspense, the drama, the plots, honestly, the one's with The Doc are my utmost favorites, but this shadowhoof guy.....Wowzah, the stories really intense
Ok, so the initials C.B. on the tree were for either Cantry or Charcoal. I'm leaning toward them being Cantry's, and that Charcoal is Shadowhoof. Any other ideas?
The plot it does thickenthicken
Meh woulda been cooler had it been a dino thunder ranger but cool none of the less. The name does sound oddly familiar to me though but why?
and thus, the plot doth thicken once more.
Apperntly Privete Eye is Agent 47...
i think i might have thought of something both amazing and horrifying thanks to this chapter. hopefully, my assumption isn't right because i really don't want it to be. welp, guess i'll just have to wait and see.
"The white king moves aside to avoid the black knight."
I have some suspicion on who that colt is but I guess we'll find out eventually.
3297801 it would be funny if he just bumps into him some day as a quick cameo
3297773 you read these too?
3303896
aye.
3304015 nice
There will be blood.
Why must you wake me up at 7:00 in the morning!
"The black king is cornerd by white king. The game is almost over. However, it is the black kings move, and the black queen draws closer."
Shawdowhoof, formally know as Charcole. Was faced with a fire on his 10th birthday. His dad sacrifices himself to save his son. His mouther is forced to marry a horrible husband who renamed Charcole to a currently unknown name. Shawdowhoof appairs to have a hatred towards crimanals. Anything I missed about him?
3304280Try giving a long hard look at case 1 of this season....