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Twilight is called in by Cadance to translate some old books in the Crystal Empire's library. To Twilight's chagrin, Cadance takes the opportunity to try and put her together with Flash Sentry. Twilight is left with no choice but to confront her feelings towards the guardspony.
(Cover art courtesy of Deviant Art member Coolez.)
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A few mistakes here and there, but overall pretty good. I wouldn't put in brackets, I would use hyphens instead. Looks more professional imo.
"Even if I did have a crush on Flash Sentry (Which I'm not saying I do), what would I say to him?"
"Even if I did have a crush on Flash Sentry - which I'm not saying I do - what would I say to him?"
Nice one-shot of Twilight and Flash.
Lol, epic ending xD
Don't take the dislikes u have seen the wrong way. I'm sure it's just people who hated the movie. I didn't like it but I didn't hate it. I'm not going to judge anything on weather shipping is good or bad even if it is a cannon ship. I enjoyed this short one parter. You wrote it well and didn't overstep any boundrys. Good job il give you a like to try to balance things out
I really enjoyed this. It was cute and totally believable for the canon Twilight. XD
"Their relationship strictly professional." Like with Shining Armor and Princess Cadance?
nice job write more
*Fangirl squee* OMG THEY R SOOOO CUTE TOGETHER!!!!!!
2840628 Funny you should mention that. I was already thinking about doing a multi-chapter story about their growing relationship.
2840336 I completely agree with that, and I can fully attest to it.
SA: "what are you doing with my sister, Sentry!!?!"
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DO IT!!!!!
2840108 Noted, and implemented.
I like this! It was cute, in an innocent way!
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FS: "U Mad, brother-in-law?"
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I loved the movie, but the problem I see is having two ponies dating in a kids show...one being a princess and stuff. I did not like that part, but I am not going to complain and I am not going to downvote a story I didn't even read if its about them
Good job at getting the Popular List, wooo!
please tell me there going to be a sequel to this
Quick to get to the point and enjoyable! I love this couple so much!
2844135 so your saying the kids movies of our day such as Snow White beauty and the beast Cinderella and countless other classics did not involve romantic attributes between people of class and royalty as well as commoners? We grew up with the same shit. And chicks dig the uniform
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I'm a girl and I hate those princess movies, I was honestly surprised when I liked my little pony. Its like the princess movies are trying to cram it down little girls throats that they can become princesses and marry a prince, and I know that wont happen. that's why I hate those movies, fake promises. Being called a chick makes me feel like guys are calling me a baby chicken...
2847919 and being called a dude makes me.....wtf is a dude anyway? I see your point in that its stereotypical. I personally think that raising kids with images like that is stupid too but the movie and tv industry will make what sells. What kid wants to watch a reality show. I grew up watching animal planet discovery channel and history channel but only when history channel was actually about history
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them making that is also making guys continue stereotype girls as well. The girly girls aren't helping either, I have more guy friends then girl friends. A dude I think is a...guy. That's all I have, I think its another word for stud. The worst part is I have all these princess books and movies and I don't watch them. I never watched them and my mom and mimi are like, "why don't you watch princess movies?" they are horrible movies. Anyway, at least its nice to know im not the only one who doesn't like the princess movies
2847967 I'm guessing your a scootaloo fan. She is best CMC
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I don't really like the CMC they don't seem to understand what their special talents are, even though they keep doing them! They annoy me...
2848108its the innocence and cluelessness of childhood
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it makes me feel like the show is trying to tell us that kids are idiots and the CMC are idiot girls...
2848147 hahaha kids are idiots. It's got nothing to do with gender. Look at snips and snails. Straight up glue eaters right there. There is a lot i didn't understand as a kid when I look back
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Does being a teenager count as being a kid? Because im 14 and most of the boys I know are idiots. The thing I find most interesting is that snips and snails are both buys and they are idiots. I like how the show tells us that when guys are younger, they are idiots and girls are smarter. Girls mature faster then boys.
2848262 I don't think the show is trying to be philosophical I think it's just trying to be humorous
This was actually pretty cute. Shining Armor's like "Oh yeah, not a problem, that's totally cool WAIT WHAT" and it's hilarious. I can imagine a situation in which Shining Armor threatens Flash Sentry with about ninety-five-billion different kinds of pain and misery if he even puts one hoof on Twilight, because it just seems like that's the kind of big brother he is. xD
I loved this! Very cute TwiFlash oneshot!
Nice story. LOL loved the ending there.
"Next story! Flash Sentry vs. Shining Armor! Who. Will. Win? lol
LOL, MAREabic.
This was really cute, but I also feel like it was a tad rushed?
And Shining proceeded to hunt Flash down
now Shining will kill Flash
This is a very good story and I hope you do a sequel where Shining Armor comes to terms with Twilight being a grown mare now.
"Welcome back, my love." Cadance kissed him.
"Good to be back." Shining smiled. "Hey, where's Twily? I figured she'd be here by now."
"Oh, she's here." Cadance confirmed. "She's just out on a lunch date with one of the guards at the moment."
"Oh, okay." Shining nodded. It took a moment for his brain to process those words. "Wait, my little sister is what?!"
The End.
That last part got me HA HA HA HA /)
I'm really afraid the whole Twilight-not-sure-she-likes-pony-Flash-since-she-liked-human-Flash thing is going to become a cliche among the upcoming twiXflash fanfics. Good read though, but I'd like to point that out.
Nice story
Well I hope Shining dose not kill Flash.
3846774 *laugh* more like rip his head off and beat it to dust then feed it to the crocodilly in the ever free forest. MUAHAAHAAAAA
Lol loved it
I loved it! Really great plot. Wish you could add a sequel. Really left me on a cliffhanger there. But I really support Twilight and Flash. Great couple!
4402442 There is a sequel. It's called "Twilight's Love". Check my story list.
I love this and I can't wait to read 'Twilight's Love'.
The ending reminded me of when my son became a drill sgt and started dating one of the new recruits.
I love the story