Razalon The Lizardman
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Looking... interesting so far.
Definitely a varied starting cast, not sure I'd have chosen Spongebob of all creatures, but I'm fairly sure I saw the random tag on the way in, so what'll ya do.
I'm only familiar with a little over half the cast, having not played Wests game and not being a Spongebob fan, but that half is presented well so far, and I love the tie-in to HUMAN.
Which reminds me, I need to finish reading that.
Anyway, funny thing, I was looking up Little Kuriboh just before I started reading, and for a moment I thought he was the god-creature-being-thing in charge. Aza's more interesting though, so I'm glad I was wrong.
Speaking of Aza, he's kind of a dick, granted I'd probably be worse if I had his power, but I'd at least be simultaneously more and less upfront about it.
Which reminds me, one should probably avoid making me omnipotent.
Otherwise, love the justification for Twilight's presence, as it allows both her and Celestia to be there, while (At least for now.) the other series' have only one representative. Kind of.
Also, it's time to d-d-d-d, d-d-d-d-d-duel!
Which reminds me, this is awesome and you're awesome for making it.
Well, I've run out of steam, guess I'll have to wait for the next chapter now, END REVIEW MODE!
I have a hat, it's patriotic.
Also, I LOVE PIANO MUSIC! It's great background for reading.
2813421 To HUMAN?
2813401 Thanks for your compliments.
Unfortunately, I'm going to need more support to keep this fic alive and well. I have a plan to let the readers choose the stories' course at various points, and I'm going to need more comments from people so I know I have said support. Otherwise, I'll have little choice other than to abandon this fic.
Anything you can do to help with this would be GREATLY appreciated.
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I commanded my entire readership to consider looking at this story, hope it helps.
Don't be surprised if it doesn't, my readership is quite small.
2814056 Try commanding them later, because right now I'm having technical difficulties regarding this story's submission.
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Oh.
Well that's unfortunate.
What seems to be the problem?
2814104 Nothing serious, just some complications that have arisen from my panicking at the thought of this story slipping passed everyone's notice.
Awesome, can't wait for more.
2816057 No, this isn't a real sequel to HUMAN. As the fic's premise clearly implies, there's alternate universes in the mix, and the Twilight here is just one of many that wrote HUMAN. However, a proper sequel will be written alongside this story, assuming this one gets more support . . .
Please, continue.
Seems to pretty much be the same premise as The Sweetie Chronicles, the thing about visiting other realities, though in a different way.
All of a sudden I come up.
Gunna read it, never know If I'm missing out
It would be strange if Celestia came from a different universe to Twilight Sparkle
A good story so far, though I was not expecting spongebob yugi or frank to be in this.
Also, I just want to expaned the popularuty of a story called Past Sins, Hread of it?
2820289 Yes, I'm sure everyone has heard of it. No, I've never read it.
It seems like a great story! I simply love the concept of universes getting entangled, it's the concept of my first fanfiction.
Your choice of characters is a bit odd, but I can't wait to see what you're going to do with them.
Will there be any more allies from alternate dimensions?
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YES. Can we get a teaser as to who it will be?
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. . . okay.
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...This a game of hangman?
2835297 You get nothing else!
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So it's a game of hangman that I can't play? Aww...
2835316 Don't worry, once the duel between Twilight and Yugi is over you'll see who's next to get roped in by Aza.
I'd like to solve the puzzle
...
"The Robot Jetpack Ninja Dinosaurs From Outer Space"
If they don't want their souls taken, either the duel will have to end in a draw or Twilight will need to overcome her inner darkness.
2842394 Yes, they're in a black, featureless void. Aza imported the blackness itself from some random alternate universe.
2835434 Is the middle one Jaden Yuki?
2842636 Nope. It's someone who's franchise has yet to be represented.
Firstly, since this is a FiM fanfic, I would have kept the reader grounded in the FiM universe by telling everything from Twilight's point of view in the first chapter, avoiding the thoughts of SpongeBob, Frank, Yugi, and maybe even Celestia's, until chapter two. But that's just my personal opinion.
Secondly, it would've made more sense for Twilight to request a photo with Spike in it. I say this not because he's my second favorite character, but because he's her closest and most loyal friend, and would've stoked much more courage and faith in herself than the other Element Bearers could ever hope to.
2846988 I understand your opinion, but I didn't want to give any preference to any one character, even those from FiM.
And I believe that the photo was taken by Spike, meaning Twilight still has him in her thoughts.
Still a really good story, can't wait for more
Dark Magician, Polymerization, Gaia The Dragon Champion
other than that, pretty good
I wish I knew who most of the new victims are, but I think that I found the next villain for them to go up against:
Spongebob vs Sweettooth (i think?).
This could be the best fight ever.
2857612 I think the author said last chapter that he was going to use the Japanese card names in this duel, I think that explains the inacuracy.
Also Spongebob vomiting would be bad considering his head is in a helmet and all.
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I forgot about that notice that Japanese card names would be used...whoops
2857820 No idea who that is.
It's actually an old foe of one of the characters roped in.
Spongebob vs. Adam the Clown?
This will not end well.
2859758 This is for recognizing who it is.
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Please tell me Spongebob won't have to watch Adam cut himself in half.
2859779 The 'Everyone' rating is there for a reason.
It looks to me like we've added in Ridley and Samus, but I'm not quite sure who is attacking Samus. The description makes me think of Dark Matter or possibly Kracko from the Kirby series but they don't quite match.
2861378 It's actually something from an entirely different franchise, one that has yet to be represented. Said franchise is, however, owned by the same company behind one of those already represented.
Question...which Bond are you going with (Brosnan, Craig, Connery, Moore)?
good story by the way
nope, none of this story....
2893840 It's supposed to be the literary character as created by Ian Flemming himself, but the physical description is more or less that of Brosnan's.
2893936 What?
GET WESKER FROM RESIDENT EVIL HERE
I knew it had to be something like James Bond but I though it would be cliché.
2894880 They'd never survive... excluding Celestia and Samus, but even then.