Pinkie Pie considers herself to be pretty good with kids. She loves spending time with them and after that disastrous night babysitting the Cake Twins, she feels she can win over any child. Then she agreed to babysit Calvin, a kid so mischievous and cunning no one else in the state dares to look after him. But Pinkie is up to the challenge.
It'll take all of Pinkies skills to take care of Calvin, and it'll take all of Calvin's wit to survive Pinkies insanity.
This my very first full fan-fiction, so if you have any constructive criticism about my writing, I would love to hear it! I really want to improve my writing ability.
Big Thanks to my editor, Husqvarnic.
I don't own MLP. Hasbro does.
I don't own Calvin and Hobbes. Bill Watterson does. If you haven't read these AMAZING comic strips, you owe it to yourself to look them up right now!
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This is going into my favourites.
Oh the potential this holds...
This can only end with the 4th wall being torn down, I know it . . .
Oh, this is the EGverse. Why do I forget that?
This pleases me. Continue.
Creative, and loads of potential.
This is going to be good.
Ohmygosh! More?
Good story so far.
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Calvin and Hobbes getting a replacement babysitter in the form of a human version of Pinkie Pie. That is a disaster just waiting to happen. And, to be honest, I don't have any idea which side, if either, I should be feeling sorry for. At any rate, I'll wait and see what the future holds in regards to this story.
The only way I can see a more chaotic crossover pairing for babysiter and child is if Dan was babysitting Calvin. This, I am unashamed to say, is going to be positively Chaotic.
*Sees title, cover photo, and description*
I LOVE YOU WITH MY ENTIRE BEING.
4743246 WHAT HE SAID!!!
4742631 either that or Pinkie's pranks put Calvin to shame
Nice to see this getting regular updates.
OH WAIT.
4863605 I'm almost done with the next couple of chapters.
MOOOAARRRR!!!!!!!
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Wait, next COUPLE?!?!
*Literal scincere applause*
THAT EXPLAINS THIS, now im 100% ok with this taking a while.
Im being very honest right now, hard to tell but I am.
Keep on rolling
Perfect......
Just......Perfect.......
I regret nothing at the moment
5008281 WOW, you are FAST!!!!
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1. Had Fiction as soon as I got home
2. I skipped doing homework to read this
3. I LOVED/ LOVE THIS COMIC.
All of my yes. This is perfection!
I hope it not to easy for pinkie I would love the time travel box and crazy fun!
Moar and I can see pinkie. Getting sad and going pinkimina
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Ask, and it shall be given.
5008304 I feel bad for your homework...
"“I know,” For a second Calvin looked guilty again, but that was then replaced by determination, “But there isn’t anything we can do about that now. We gotta do this. Lets go.”"
Oddly I think think this does not fit Calvin. It is close but I think Calvin should be trying to say/think that he is right while at the same time knowing he is wrong but trying his best not to show it. I can think of several instances you can see that in the comic (for example when Hobbes wishes tor a tuna sandwich and he gets it while Calvin does not with Hobbes saying "My wish came true).
I really like this though. Calvin v Pinkie is an interesting idea and could lead to a lot of fun. More interestingly is that we can take this in a very different direction than Rosalyn (which you could have emulated using somebody like Twilight or Dash). For instance Pinkie with her jokes about breaking the 4th wall and general goofiness could potentially interact with Hobbes directly (the hard part with this if you want to stick true to the comics you need to keep it ambiguous about whether Hobbes is imaginary or real while interacting with Pinkie and bonus points if Hobbes starts to wonder the same thing with Pinkie). Nobody else could potentially do this without ruining the normal dynamic (though once again keeping Hobbe's ambiguity will be a challenge).
YES
YES
YES
YE#$*#(*&!#)@_()
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YES YES YES
I REGRET NOTHING
Never give up Calvin. Never show weakness.
For if you do...
Hilarious story
But can you make sure that dialogue from different people are at least on different lines
Uggh, missed like, TWO LITTLE PUNCTUATION TIDBITS.
Now I feel inadequate...
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I will make note of that, and attend to it in the future.
Two capital letters there
Please bring in stupendous man.
Great stuff. Love C&H. Just one little thing:
It's 'dreidel' actually. But other than that, /)
SELF-AWARENESS ALERT!
Since when did having the actual,physical,living embodiment of random insanity,(also known as Pinkie.) babysit Calvin and Hobbes a good idea?I LOVE IT.
***starts laughing like a mad woman*** No matter how much I love Calvin and Hobbes,CALVIN WILL NOT SURVIVE THE RAGE OF THE RAGING PINKS.SHE WILL GET EVEN AND DRIVE YOU INSANE WITH HER FOURTH WALL BREAKS.
Me when I'm reading this and placing my shelf in her place