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Looking... interesting so far.
Definitely a varied starting cast, not sure I'd have chosen Spongebob of all creatures, but I'm fairly sure I saw the random tag on the way in, so what'll ya do.
I'm only familiar with a little over half the cast, having not played Wests game and not being a Spongebob fan, but that half is presented well so far, and I love the tie-in to HUMAN.
Which reminds me, I need to finish reading that.
Anyway, funny thing, I was looking up Little Kuriboh just before I started reading, and for a moment I thought he was the god-creature-being-thing in charge. Aza's more interesting though, so I'm glad I was wrong.
Speaking of Aza, he's kind of a dick, granted I'd probably be worse if I had his power, but I'd at least be simultaneously more and less upfront about it.
Which reminds me, one should probably avoid making me omnipotent.
Otherwise, love the justification for Twilight's presence, as it allows both her and Celestia to be there, while (At least for now.) the other series' have only one representative. Kind of.
Also, it's time to d-d-d-d, d-d-d-d-d-duel!
Which reminds me, this is awesome and you're awesome for making it.
Well, I've run out of steam, guess I'll have to wait for the next chapter now, END REVIEW MODE!
I have a hat, it's patriotic.
Also, I LOVE PIANO MUSIC! It's great background for reading.
2813421 To HUMAN?
2813401 Thanks for your compliments.
Unfortunately, I'm going to need more support to keep this fic alive and well. I have a plan to let the readers choose the stories' course at various points, and I'm going to need more comments from people so I know I have said support. Otherwise, I'll have little choice other than to abandon this fic.
Anything you can do to help with this would be GREATLY appreciated.
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I commanded my entire readership to consider looking at this story, hope it helps.
Don't be surprised if it doesn't, my readership is quite small.
2814056 Try commanding them later, because right now I'm having technical difficulties regarding this story's submission.
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Oh.
Well that's unfortunate.
What seems to be the problem?
2814104 Nothing serious, just some complications that have arisen from my panicking at the thought of this story slipping passed everyone's notice.
Awesome, can't wait for more.
2816057 No, this isn't a real sequel to HUMAN. As the fic's premise clearly implies, there's alternate universes in the mix, and the Twilight here is just one of many that wrote HUMAN. However, a proper sequel will be written alongside this story, assuming this one gets more support . . .
Please, continue.
Seems to pretty much be the same premise as The Sweetie Chronicles, the thing about visiting other realities, though in a different way.
All of a sudden I come up.
Gunna read it, never know If I'm missing out
It would be strange if Celestia came from a different universe to Twilight Sparkle
A good story so far, though I was not expecting spongebob yugi or frank to be in this.
Also, I just want to expaned the popularuty of a story called Past Sins, Hread of it?
2820289 Yes, I'm sure everyone has heard of it. No, I've never read it.
It seems like a great story! I simply love the concept of universes getting entangled, it's the concept of my first fanfiction.
Your choice of characters is a bit odd, but I can't wait to see what you're going to do with them.
Firstly, since this is a FiM fanfic, I would have kept the reader grounded in the FiM universe by telling everything from Twilight's point of view in the first chapter, avoiding the thoughts of SpongeBob, Frank, Yugi, and maybe even Celestia's, until chapter two. But that's just my personal opinion.
Secondly, it would've made more sense for Twilight to request a photo with Spike in it. I say this not because he's my second favorite character, but because he's her closest and most loyal friend, and would've stoked much more courage and faith in herself than the other Element Bearers could ever hope to.
YES! Spongebob!
Just started this story. I do have to say I'm intrigued. However, I'm not sure everyone heard what Aza said correctly. Aza said they could have one item of ANYTHING! Not one of your personal items or one of the items from your universe. Anything... So, I think some of them wasted what was essentially a very powerful limited wish. Seriously a machete? I'm sure he could have been more creative than that.
Anyway, I'll try to read the rest of the story because other than that oversight it seems pretty good.
The pacing is a little dry, but I will give this a chance! Onto the next chapter
... Fuck, this is awesome, and confusing to boot.
I am so in!
DAM IT AZA YOU HAD ONE JOB WHY DID YOU SAVE THAT ANNOYING SPONGE