• Member Since 10th Mar, 2013
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Dartagnen


I have become Death; The Destroyer of Worlds

Comments ( 152 )

uh, you might want to re-read your description again, i think you made an error

Very good, definitely has potential to be a great story. Can't wait Dartagnen :pinkiehappy:

I really like where this is going more pls :pinkiehappy:

yeah uh dartagnen, im not sure if this is me our its everyone but im not seeing your story on my favorites and i have to check the the updates to see if you posted a chapter also to make sure it wasn't some error i checked your stories and i don't see it, but that still wont stop me from reading this awesome story, keep us up with the chapters

2783485 I shall start some more later.

first comment and i told you ( insert authors name ) i would keep a eye out, i definitely like where the story is going ,the suspense is killing

2856099 I feel like you and this story are going to be great friends. I'll just keep going. This story will have some awesomeness in a few chapters.

2856122 i am a halo fan and plus to me this story is one of a few halo with a elite let alone one that is nice and is not trying to attack a human ( which we know shenanigans will happen when him and six meet )

2856141 Dear God! You just read my mind.

2856163 alirighty then still annoyed that i cant see it so im going to bookmark the page and keep checking on it, cant for the next chapter

2856178 Well, I shall make it tomorrow, I just wrote in two stories at the same time, and I'm taking a break from writing today.

14 hours? Its finally a recent update! XD

2859073 You bet your ass it is! I was feeling good yesterday, and I felt like giving you guys a treat for bein' my readers.

This story needs more likes

yeah more friends, more problems , I LIKE IT!!!!!!!
also not many know this story but on the plus it has no dislikes

Heyyyy, this isn't bad at all! :D Though I never would've thought Noble 6 cursed so much. Oh well, it's always the quiet ones xD

Wait a sec. Is this humanized?

Man this is awesome!

2925953 No, it's anthro.

2925960 Glad you like it. :moustache:

2925963 Oh. I still hate the premise of it all. The story is good though! I just hate anthro.

2926053 Meh, it's better than just ponies, but I didn't want it to be human, because that would mean that they landed on a Human Colony, and it would mess the story up.

2926059 Ponies are best man. Not bagging on your story but ponies rule over anthro any day.

Max

There is an anthro tag now by the way, you should update it since some people hate it.

2926320 We have our opinions. :pinkiehappy: As long as Pinkie's happy, everyone's fine.

2926413 I'll go do that.

omg i love these grunts! :rainbowlaugh:

2943036Well, I had no ideas, then I thought, "What could piss off an elite, but you have to love them because they're adorable when you aren't killing them?" Then it hit me like a plasma grenade. Plus, Six is going to loose what's left of his sanity with these two, Yap and Zip, brothering him.

the grunts made friends with a timber puppy?
i like these grunts more and mre.

2944542 I just thought of that, and I thought that if Yap had a Timberwolf puppy, he'd be a badass.

So there is a Covernant storm elite aswell?

2950070 Well, shit just got real. :moustache: Seriously though, Storm Elite is probably the scariest looking Elite so far, probably the ugliest too. Might scare some people, or, a lot of ponies if a whole ship shows up full of them.

wait is in in the middle of town?

2953625 yeah, that makes no sense. :facehoof: a little help here?

2953625 Well, I'll fix that.

2957070 My new editor is offline right now, so be patient.

Alright people, some badass fight is going to happen in the next chapter, which I will be posting soon. :pinkiehappy: Also, I want to ask you guys something, does this song fit Halo?

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We'll I would choose: Halo Reach :Three days grace - get out alive

Ha jorge is funny :))))

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