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The Farmer and The Rocker is a romantic love story that was written by Bronies and Pegasisters for Bronies and Pegasisters.
The story revolves around Applejack, farmer of Ponyville's Sweet Apple Acres, and Thrash Trotter, lead vocalist of popular rock band Blank Flank, and how they develop a special connection to one another that eventually grows stronger making them inseparable. But the worlds they come from and the lives they live from affect the fate of their relationship...and their love.
Like a regular episode of My Little Pony, the situations are relatable, the story is funny and dramatic, and the cultural references are cleaver enough to be put into the original show.

I have a youtube channel where I have an audio book/radio edit of this story. I work with 8 other voice actors in a group known as THE GROUPIES. We upload a new chapter every month
here is a link to our page: [youtube=http://www.youtube.com/channel/UC-3byXAZIDZZzKQLM4E2vEw]

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 12 )

i could've sworn there was a chapter 4 (5 counting the prologue)

2793668 there is its going through some edits they will be back up later. Thanks for reading

2793693 No prob. Actually am exited for the next chapter.:pinkiehappy::raritystarry::twilightsmile:

Comment posted by mibevan deleted Jul 9th, 2013

hello form south Florida (CFB ftw) so far im liking this fic

Several capitalization, punctuation, pronunciation, and (I'm guessing) font error, but, other then that, I really hope for next chapter.:raritystarry:
Keep it up! :pinkiehappy:
Though I will say (and this is just my point of view) the story seems a little... weak on something... I can't really say for sure, but while i was reading this that I noticed something. :applejackunsure: Maybe it's just me.:facehoof:
Other then that, I really hope for the next chapter to come out soon.:pinkiehappy:
I'm practically DYING to know what will happen!!!:yay:

Sir/Madam, I demand a fine order of MOAR!!!!!!!:flutterrage:.....please.:pinkiesmile:
It's really good, so far. Hope that Thrash's past would be a tear-jerker.:twilightsmile:

Again, some pronunciation error(I lived in the country side so I know what I'm talking 'bout) like "I'm" or "I" are usually pronounced "Ah'm" or "Ah", "My" or "Myself" are pronounced "Mah" or "Mahself". Basically anything that gives an "I" sound are usually pronounced with "Ah". Unless you're really OCD about spelling, which I understand, then keep doing what your doing. It's just a little pet peeve when I see Applejack say "I" instead of "Ah" that my eye twitch a little.:twilightblush:

Some punctuation errors, like:

“Yea I was curious about that. What gives Rush?” Thrash asked.
“Yea, I was curious about that. What gives Rush?” Thrash asked.

“No thank you. I need to shower before leaving anyway. All that practicing left me smelling worse then a sweat sock.”
“No, thank you. I need to shower before leaving anyway. All that practicing left me smelling worse then a sweat sock.”

“Hey get off my back frenchy! Technically I was the one that made friends with her.”
“Hey get off my back, frenchy! Technically, I was the one that made friends with her.”

As they made their way east, She showed him where Rarity, Twilight, and Pinkie Pie worked She really ...
As they made their way east, She showed him where Rarity, Twilight, and Pinkie Pie worked. She really ...

“I never knew how big this place was,” he said. “It looked smaller from the sky.”
“I never knew how big this place was,” he said, “It looked smaller from the sky.”

“It’s kind of like Manehatten only filled with all kinds of ponies from far and near."
“It’s kind of like Manehatten, only filled with all kinds of ponies from far and near."

“You and me both my friend."
“You and me both my friend."

“Honestly I’m not surprised.”
“Honestly, I’m not surprised.”

“What’s wrong, was it something I said?”
“What’s wrong? Was it something thatI said?”

“Are you alright there sugercube?”
“Are you alright there, sugercube?”

“No it’s fine. It’s just whenever I think about it the memories just flow back into my head.”
“No it’s fine. It’s just whenever I think about it the memories, it just flow back into my head.”

The one's in blue are what should've been added so it won't be a fragment sentence.

And some more that I should add, but I have to go to sleep. Hope you can find more and I really hope for your future endeavors.:twilightblush:
Wish you the best of luck!!!

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...Thank You for the spellcheck just try and message me though. Your help is greatly appreciated. And Let me assure you What's up along the way is definitely worth it

I like this, but get so annoyed by the italic text...

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