this just turned into a masterpiece of a fanfiction i love the setting and the way they speak, its brillant

2745522 Oh my cheeks burn (the good kind(ON the face!!))
Masterpiece? wow thats a strong word. Appreciate it, we're not done yet and the endings make the story. thank you for the feedback, two to go!

In moments like these the Nike saying applies:
"JUST DO IT"!!!!!

2746268 Oh man I just keep reading over the chapter and seeing fluttershy poking her head in, screaming just do it. Good one dude/dudet!

As of now, this has just become a master piece to my eyes, The Crystal Army agrees with me

2769519 And you haven't even reached the best bit yet! HA HA, I't good to see you are enjoying it this much!

3070695 I did adjust that a bit thanks, you have an utterly filthy mind! And I thank you for it!

I am just hear to give my vote, you did a grate Job on this story. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the grate work!

Dragonfox

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Welcome new reader. Thank you. Because of this comment I will edit out the next one and have it ready tomorrow.

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Welcome new reader!
My friend why do I want thousands of likes? I learned that is a dream and it frankly would not happen to quality stories ha ha. Frankly it's people/readers like you that I am happy to have enjoy my little stories. I do feel guilty the love scene is not up yet (chapter 9) because of the reedit. I can guarantee I put all my effort to not make it low brow. , although very little has actually changed.
Please feel free to comment as you go along, on faults, errors, just general things. I do appreciate it and welcome you to do so.
Regards
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Straight into the favorites folder...awaiting the next chapter with gusto!!

I read over this story a few years ago in its original draft, I like your improvements. When will the next update be installed? This wonderful story is a masterpiece!