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IN TO THE FRAY THE GREATS FIGHT I WILL EVER KNOW LIVE AND DIE THIS DAY LIVE AND DIE TE NEXT DAY
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Not bad.Not bad at all... MOOOAARRR
this story is very well written so far i and like the fact that you gave us back-story on the protagonist very quickly at the beginning hope to see more soon
MOAR
MOOOORE!!
His headace goes away prety fast
"Why thank you, you a fine genital Colt".
gahahahahah!
gen·i·tal
/ˈjenitl/
Adjective
Of or relating to the human or animal reproductive organs.
Noun
A person or animal's external organs of reproduction.
If you'd like I can help Proofread your chapters to prevent embarrassing mistakes like "Why thank you, you a fine genital Colt".
Hit me up with a PM if you're interested! :D
I hate you spell check thanks for telling me about this
"Which is inhabited by many different types of spices" LET THE SPICE FLOW!
1996883 I cant believe I made these mistakes
Thanks again
, and like always fuck you spell check.
Well Luna heard what he thought.
hey man i love your storey. mebbeh ah could help wit da story you writing?
yeah maybe i could check it over for errors and be your spellchecker guy. offer's up if ya want it.
I find the idea of a magically conjured illusion of shadow guard to be highly unlikely. My reasoning is this. Equestria has a darker side, how dark, is dependent on the author, but it does have dark elements. Then there are the villians such as Nightmare Moon, Chrysalis, Sombra, etc., would not be a good idea to leave the royal compounds unguarded at night, regardless of how "real" the illusion is. They're there to protect the royal family, and any guests, diplomats, dignitaries, and so on, from whatever ill intentions the villain/ antagonist has towards the royal family and/ or its guests, or material goods. Also, magic requires mana, and it's not a good idea to have fake guards that are constantly draining your magical reserve/ pool/ power, which may lead to a situation leaving Luna drained, and therefore vulnerable to an attack, magical or otherwise. Thought, I'd point this out.
I understand where you are coming from when you say that. But when I say there illunions all I mean is that there not real Ponys yet they can still fight protect and think for themeseleves. I have taken into consideration that might have been confusing but I won't change it, sorry. I'm happy you share this with me and I hope you have a nice day.