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It is magnificent , I hope there will be more to come?

2731093 Thank you Moonlight. Appreciate the enthusiasm and I hope to keep your interest until the end!

This should have more views, a very beautiful story indeed!:twilightsmile:

2737221 Daawww shucks. Seriously though. Appreciate the sentiment, I hope to not disappoint in the conclusion!

No don't end it here. You have to see this through to completion.
But don't have him run off or do something stupid at the last minute, they have both come to far for that to happen.

2740360 AAW! You spoil da supwise!:raritycry:
Wouldn't dare, it would be too easy! OR WOULD I MWA HA HA! I was trying to provoke some conversation is all. A little bit quiet on the comment section here dot dot dot

very sweet, but not TOO sweet.:pinkiehappy: i approve!

2743120 Sweet? I'm flattered, worried it was borderline for a moment there. No cavities yet!:rainbowlaugh:

this just turned into a masterpiece of a fanfiction:heart::heart::heart: i love the setting and the way they speak, its brillant :pinkiehappy:

2745522 Oh my cheeks burn (the good kind(ON the face!!):flutterrage:)
Masterpiece? wow thats a strong word. Appreciate it, we're not done yet and the endings make the story. thank you for the feedback, two to go!

In moments like these the Nike saying applies:
"JUST DO IT"!!!!! :flutterrage:

2746268 Oh man I just keep reading over the chapter and seeing fluttershy poking her head in, screaming just do it. Good one dude/dudet!

Why didn´t you put the human tag? It was pretty obvious from the start what Marion truly was.

2747508did you dislike for that reason? just good to know

Of course! never wanted to hide it, but you put the tag then it falls into a label and then you get labelled and its an automatic HiE fic. This one i wanted to be a little different, the reader gets the confirmation (or not ha ha) at the end here, and enjoys the little allure of it.

OR do you think that's wrong to do?

i say end it here. its perfect the way it its:twilightsmile:

2748025 Cool. one vote for let it be. hope it wasn't too much to the end. wanted to avoid overdoing it,

I say continue only if you want to. I wouldn't mind reading more chapters but it is your story, and thus, should be your decision on whether or not to continue.

2750314 Appreciate the input, I think I will... stay tuned...

i think it it did:twilightsmile: im glad i could help, it was wery fun:heart:

It's not pervy at all, there are far worse out there.

2751878Only time wil tell ha ha, onward to the conclusion!

2752075 So true ha ha. Thank you. Glad it didn't loose the integrity,

2752091 As always! :twilightsmile:

Bravo! A happy ending! :twilightsmile:

:flutterrage: NO! I WANT MORE! :fluttercry: Don't end it yet!

this was an awesome fan fic:twilightsmile:

you create a new level

cool --> 20% cooler --> awesome --> marionetter ¡¡¡ :rainbowkiss:

I just read this from start to finish. Awe inspiring. Simply awe inspiring:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

2755261 Thank you! Glad to have you as a reader for the whole thing! happy readings:pinkiehappy:

2755407 appreciate the proofreading once more ha ha! honoured to have had your analytical skills. May call on them again in the future!:twilightsmile:

2755509 ha ha. thanks! that is very kind and a super reaction. Happy you enjoyed it

2756136 I like that ha ha, happy you enjoyed it to that degree, sorry to rob you of the few hours (i'm guessing) it took. any favourite parts?

2755372 This comment makes me want to keep going. Maybe later on I will try a few more branches, a story arc is difficult to find. I will TRY! no promises....

SOMEONE RETRACTED A DISLIKE!

Dont know who it was but it is good to know I solved whatever you didn't like. It shows how awesome the community is here. Hats of to you all!

Maybe the reason this story has not been viewed much is because its not in a Group! Or is it...?

2763503Aww, is sweet you care:rainbowkiss: It's in TEN! Ha ha(unless I dont know how groups work). i have no idea how the system works. I personally am satisfied with the story, the cover art but I guess its too weird. Hres my loooooooong theory:pinkiegasp:, this story has an auduence who are here to enjoy a story, this isnt a 'clop', its all about luna and her interest in the character. there are no gimmicks here (such as cartoon characters from other shows), :pinkiegasp:there is limited violence. Truth be told its downright boring unless you have the mind to process it. skim through and you will miss any emotional experience, read it correctly and apparently you will really enjoy it. as many readers already have. There are a lot of cool stories out there for different tastes, something about mine is off-putting (i guess) unless you read it...weird. theory over ha ha. I am here to write though and every single reader is a victory in itself. The kind of stories that make it to the higher ranks are not often great ones(according to my perception of great literature). Wow thats a lot of BS here ha ha! My BS though.

Tell me, did you take anything away from your reading experience?

2768266If you're seriously starting out my goodness you are in for one hay of a good ride. At least everyone else had enjoyed it! Feel free to leave any and all insults all over the place about my lousy writing skills ha ha:twilightsmile:

And I still Continue to read this beautiful story:twilightsmile: I am in love with already:twilightsmile:

2769037 I have seen bad writing skills before my friend, and this not one of them:pinkiesmile: but I am greatly enjoying this story though greatly:pinkiehappy:

2769202 You:flutterrage: that comment actually got me!:facehoof:You finished it already? That was quick. I would love to know if you had any favourite parts?

2769166 Daaawwwwww, shuckins. Thanks:twilightsheepish:

2769294 I have not finished it yet, but I am loving every chapter that I have read so far:pinkiehappy: very good work:pinkiehappy:

2769304 Cool, dont be concerned about calling me out on any BS!

I can now say, this is my favorite chapter, to have people to share such information too:ajsmug: I now must see how this comes to an end:twilightsmile:

Luna loves him, good, that's very good:scootangel:

As of now, this has just become a master piece to my eyes, The Crystal Army agrees with me:twilightsmile:

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