Applejack wins Soarin in a charity fundraiser and now the Wonderbolt has to do whatever she says for the entire weekend. Which would be nice as long as her nervousness and secret crush she has for him doesn’t hold her back. Anthro ponies.
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ITS ALLLIIIIIVVVVEEEE!!!
Finally!
The build up of the romance and the pie and all that was amazing and incredibly well done.
The actual clop felt a little short, but was still hot.
The conclusion of the chapter was fantastic.
Was about to shut down for the night and go to bed *see this updated* well guess i am getting 30min less sleep tonight, but totally worth it. Clop was decent but the story was worth more.
For both the update and the clop
It's sweet that the two bonded over pseudo-stalking each other
Yay! It's here at last!
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Thank you.
Probably because she was too busy having a fangasm. And wouldn't it be mannerismS?
You sir have won the Internet. Granny Smith is best pony.
I love Granny Smith! And you mean cackle, not crackle.
*sigh* You're a moron Soarin'.
I'd listen to Soarin' if I were you, he's a pegasus, ie he has weather magic, so you'd think he'd be able to tell when it's going to rain.
AppleJACK droned, and droned is probably not the verb you want to use.
Now he figures it out.
Hm.
I feel your clop writing abilities are fine, you don't need to feel insecure, I'm curious to see where this goes.
Nice, but there's some things you may want to edit.
Those should be "pegasi".
And I'm pretty sure that should be "confines".
Get rid of one of the 'was'.
I think this is the family name, so it should be 'the Apples'.
Aww yeah! I guess this was the Pia-sama picture moment? A damn shame the site's rules won't allow you to post it.
Booyah, update!
yay read it late enough to get the payout and not have to be left high and dry. also this line
best thing ive read in years.
4956379 whens the next update?
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I hope this story updates soon as well