Applejack wins Soarin in a charity fundraiser and now the Wonderbolt has to do whatever she says for the entire weekend. Which would be nice as long as her nervousness and secret crush she has for him doesn’t hold her back. Anthro ponies.
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noooooo don't we get to see the fight at all
And she is the Element of Honesty, defeater of Nightmare Moon, Discord, Tirek, if this is post Season 4, and pretty damn strong. Oh, and she knows Princess Celestia AND Luna personally. Also, neck, not next.
oooooh snap!
Flim, I'm about to say some thoughts here, Please know that I'm taking this right off my thoughts as of 1:07 pm EST and know that probably they may change, but I'm gonna say them while they are on the tip of my mind.
First, I want some blood in the next chapter. There's gonna be a hell of a catfight because Misty is gonna try to stand up to Applejack, so I want some blood. Not life-threatening or critical blood, and for the love of Celestia, please don't kill anyone off (that goes double for Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash), but there has to be some that show that really got down. I understand that all fanfictions in our fandom have the underlying concept that, well, friendship is magic. In real life though, it doesn't work that way more often than not.
Second, there has to be someone that gets to be locked up. Somepony needs to be put behind bars, in handcuffs, taken away by Solar and/or Lunar Guards, what have you--maybe two. I get that the Mane 6 have a sort of Teflon-like ability that is because they have saved Equestria from chaos and destruction on numerous occasions (you could say they, Spike included, have sort of diplomatic immunity). My money's on Misty Fly definitely, but I'm leaning on Applejack having a couple of nights in the slammer as well--assault is still assault. Plus it would be quite a scene where Applejack is released from her short sentence and have Soarin as well as her family there when she comes out. I really like the idea that Soarin' now knows firsthand that his mare got a bit of kickass to her, and I think that Applejack's honesty would lead to her wanting to serve. And I have to be honest--I feel a little jilted that Spike and Rarity didn't get locked up for that time on the train. I can't help it--seeing our mares arrested or locked up is fascinating to me.
I can't believe that Granny and Apple Bloom actually fell for Misty's slop though--that concerns me a bit. Come to think of it, makes me wonder if there are other times where their apparent naivety could have potentially been damaging for the farm. No wonder that Applejack is the main operator of Sweet Apple Acres.
7004510 I could see Apple Bloom, she's young and doesn't really know better. But to be honest, Granny Smith is a different story.
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While I agree with ya for most of your post, let me stop ya right here. If AJ actually ran things, her family would be homeless. For example, when Apple Bloom got into Time Turners face trying to sell him apples, AJ tried to give the stallion the entire bushel for free... For FREE! That's bad business sense. She could've given him half off price of a dozen apples instead to make up for it. Why? Let's say the going rate of an apple is 3 bits. Now let's say (conservatively) that the bushel held 50 apples. That's a lose profit of 150 bits if she GAVE it away to Time Turner for what amounted to an overzealous adolescent who let frustration at her lack of salemenship override her common etiquette.
And the whole first Flim-Flam debacle? Well, I could go into detail about that, but they're have been plenty of authors who have called out AJ (and thus FiM's writers) about what a poor message THAT sent to kids. Again, if you want to know all about that, I can quote some stuff from two different authors (one of whom is quite infamous for his political views and just plain being a rude jerk to anyone who he thinks doesn't agree with him) who easily point out not just her stupidity in handling the situation, but dishonesty too!
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All things, considered, I'm thinking that I should have said Machintosh was the operator of Sweet Apple Acres, or just re-work that statement, since at second thought it is quite wonky...I can't help it sometimes--we see so much more of Applejack to the point where we assume that she's the spokespony for the entire operation...we forget that Mac's the older brother, and that he's been running the farm since he's the firstborn...at least that's where most families operate...
7004694 *Nods* Yeah, that's my headcanon anyways, but who knows how it really goes.
Good common sense, AJ. It's ugly, but it could have been uglier.
Misty Sky has forgotten something very important.
Earth Pony magic equals enhanced strength. Not only is Applejack likely to break her in half, but she's part of Celestia's 'inner circle'...meaning assaulting her like this could technically be qualified as treason, if a vindictive Twilight got to the lawbooks first.
"It's the eye of the tiger
It's the thrill of the fight
Rising up to the challenge of our rival
And the last known survivor
Stalks his prey in the night
And he's watching us all with the eye of the tiger"
Grandma Applejack why do you have a pair of Pegasus Wings hanging over the fireplace.
Well young-in let my tell you about this piece of trash that tried to kidnap your granddaddy.
Aj is gonna kick Misty's ass to the moon and back
It feels a liitle ooc honestly that ab and smith instantly bought her story to me, otherwise good chapter cant wait for the fight!
Yass! All my yass!
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That's true, not to mention that the moment Misty Fly puts a feather on Applejack that isn't self-defense, she can kiss her recent Wonderbolt status good-bye...Spitfire would take good care of that, just like the disgraced Wind Rider...
Ding Ding Ding...Let's get ready to rumble.
Round one...FIGHT!
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Wonderbolt and Former Guard Committing Treason by attacking one of the mares responsible for keeping Equestria safe. If that doesn't sell Newspapers faster than Sonic the Hedgehog moves while on meth, I don't know what will.
Also. While the bitch may be have better memory with recognizing faces than Soarin, I am guessing the stupid cow doesn't care to keep up with anything important happening in Equestria otherwise she would know who AJ is.
This fight will end in 2 seconds.
7184384 great minds think alike.