Applejack wins Soarin in a charity fundraiser and now the Wonderbolt has to do whatever she says for the entire weekend. Which would be nice as long as her nervousness and secret crush she has for him doesn’t hold her back. Anthro ponies.
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And I'll help her with it!
our biological need to eat flowers was their demise,
...whoops
“Well… then let’s do that.
So... it was an R63 potion in that needle?
Well... I gotta agree with Twilight there. WHAT THE FUCK?
A few misspellings here and there, but overall enjoyable. The crazed fan scared me, and now AJ has Soarin' as her Wonderbolt for the Weekend free of charge. Sweet. Can hardly wait until she bakes him a pie after a work day.
Glad to see a new chapter at long last.
Yellow Berry creeps me out like no other. Hell, if a girl like that was stalking me, I'd lock myself in my house. With all the lights turned off. And a knife. Not to stab, only to intimidate. If you don't have to hurt a person to get out of a situation, then don't do it. Then again, a girl like her probably wouldn't be intimidated by a knife...... Oh well, I can always run!
Soarinjack is my fav ship, we'll besides lunamac.
*squees with an ear-piercing volume that is wholly unbefitting of a 6' man* Ahem. So, now we move on to the big question: How long until Soarin figures out that she's Pie Girl?
I think in this sentence you meant to say stalkers (a person or group who engages in unwanted or obsessive attention towards another person), not 'stocker' (someone who restocks shelves) lol.
Otherwise, good chapter.
The security team needs to be fired and replaced with some competent people/ponies.
You can't stop it there! I demand more!
That was... interesting. I love this absurd bit of a humor. Kind of reminds me of Baka & Test. And I very much love the small twist of how AJ gets Soarin' for the weekend. It serves as good reason for Soarin' to warm up to her quicker, even with the pie obsession playing a part, and it's far more exciting than AJ simply winning the auction.
Although I should point out of a few errors in your writing, not in terms of diction, but in terms of text. When you're writing out a character's thoughts, it's best to use just italics and nothing more. Adding quotation marks just makes it confusing. Also, bold text is not used for emphasis, italics are.
Just something to consider. Anyway, good read, and I look forward to what happens next.
Yay, a yandere character. x_x
And finally! AJ and Soarin' meet! :D now for the lovin' xD
Karma and Fate are cousins with Destiny, aren't they??
Applejack didn't even want to go to the Wonderbolt auction, and once again, she was unsuccessful in her quest, at least legally (I think this is Fate, since she herself didn't purposely add to her dream to see her crush in person), while at the same time, Soarin' is genuinely offended with the auction and get sold to a lunatic who isn't even supposed to be there...(Karma--didn't want a crazy pony but got one anyway). But despite the random shenanigans, Applejack rescues Soarin' from the lunatic, and as a way to say thanks he offers to give his Wonderbolt Weekend to Applejack. (Destiny---soon enough, Soarin' will find out that the Pie Girl from the his quese and the GGG long ago is the girl that he offered to share the weekend with, Applejack )
Sometimes, it's a lot more fun to take the scenic route as opposed to the freeway.....it gives you the chance to slow down and enjoy the ride. Also, you will more likely be seem more things than just looking from the interstate.
Also, I have a feeling like in a previous chapter, I have a feeling that Spike and Rarity will not be taking the return trip to Ponyville. They will probably use their time here in Canterlot as a sort of a vacation/date to "deepen their relationship " , and this would further focus on Soarin and Applejack.
Hooray for a new update at last.
YEEEEEESSSSSSS! Awesome chapter, man!
Consider yourself cocked and locked with your very own pocket Mane medic. Cause I'm now following you. ^_^
Mane Medic
4157468 that was a good chapter; albeit a bit short but a good chapter. it was nice of you to write that applejack didn't win because we can't win them all. however I'm a bit frightened by yellow berry (bitch is crazy). but that was your plan all along. anyways I know that Soarin didn't see Apple jacks face. are you planning to make a dramatic scene from that in the next chapter?
Brush your teeth
I love this story
My god I thought you were dead. Keep up the good work!!
hey, has anyone seen Pia-sama fan art on deviantART; it looks awesome.fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2013/363/1/0/rainy_kiss_by_pia_sama-d6zz5p3.png
I read the entirety of this story within the time span of two hours. I expected a fair bit of clop in the story. It goes to say I was sorely disappointed because not only was there only one clop scene, it didn't have anything to do with the main character in this story! The only reason my favourite stays there for the time being is so I can keep track of the updates.
You're not dead? Thank God...
There are two Clop scenes.
And I'm so happy for AJ! [Tough Titties. - Rainbow Dash]
Misery Alert!
Also, are Celestia and Luna pulling an epic troll on Twily?