Applejack wins Soarin in a charity fundraiser and now the Wonderbolt has to do whatever she says for the entire weekend. Which would be nice as long as her nervousness and secret crush she has for him doesn’t hold her back. Anthro ponies.
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I will say this once again. Misty can probably be tried for high treason against Equestria for trying to murder one of the Bearers of the Elements of Harmony who are basically the "Keep Equestria Safe From Everything" Button. Forget her career, she better hope Equestria does not have the Death Penalty. And can somepony do something about the incompetent police department? Maybe remove them and set up a proper guard barracks with guards hand picked by Shining Armor to handle things instead of these morons?
I'm genuinely shocked that the police department is in such shambles. I've heard of dumb cops, but wow. These guys just take the stupid, seriously unappetizing cake. You'd think Princess Twilight would have to do something about them.
Okay, since Tirek was brought up, this is post Twilight being a Princess (I don't remember enough of the rest of this story to confirm it otherwise) so Princess Twilight should get down there and read those police the riot act and have their badges.
I thought those two are going to have 'wild in prison' sex as a sendoff.
Wow! Didn't realize my ideas were that good...it's pretty much everything I mentioned in the previous chapter...
This is gonna be a hell of a story to tell the others at their next game night:
: Well, Applejack, you certainly look and sound like an entirely new mare now that you're not single anymore.
Yep. Seems like Granny was right as rain, as usual--I don't really need a stallion to take care of me, but sure as Tartarus that I'm peachy keen that Soarin is there by my side when needed.
: Still though, you never would have thought of a weekend like this would ever come out--from the Flower Festival to getting arrested and spending that Sunday night in a jail cell. Told ya Soarin is so much of a hunk!! So AWESOME!!!
: Speaking of relationships....you and 'Laney'--are ya'll gonna be getting serious or just still playin' around? Maybe you need to do what Rares did for her Spikey-Wikey and don the maid outfit.
: Ooh!!! And I have just the outfit for an extroverted athlete like you!!!
: ...Oh crud.
Yeesh, Yandere much.
Kick, not kicked.
OK, Yandere INDEED.
Nice shot!
Agreed, self defense or not, murder's murder.
I'm afraid you're in the wrong this time, AJ.
I'm with the officer here, unintentional or not, AJ stooped to her level to fight.
Soarin', just take it.
No, they're just doing their jobs.
Oh for- AJ, just spend the night, it's so much easier than digging yourself into a deeper hole.
Your funeral.
Unless you want more trouble, yes. Incompetent or not, just go along with it and it'll make things easier.
It's actually illegal to fight in Ponyville?
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I wouldn't exactly say that...but when it went from a scuffle to attempted murder and assault, that's gonna get the fuzz knocking. After all, Apple Bloom saw the knife on Misty Fly when they were fighting and she's the one that called the police. And I bet you that there's a charge in possession of a unlicensed weapon for Misty Fly, not to mention the other charges pending.
7379273 Pretty much this in a shellnut.
Git outa ma barn! I need it!
The story was a fun read, I'm hoping you are at least considering a followup to the story. Mostly on account that it would be nice to see their story continue. This story was their finally finding each other and learning of their shared feelings, a story that explores them taking the relationship further without the being on time limit would be nice, also Misty's trial/court martial also needs to be seen in my opinion; and I'm sure a story involving the process to their eventual wedding will be fun to see, especially with their pre-wedding rituals.
It would be nice to see sequels, but this ending works well as both an end to the story (of sorts) and possible setup for coming followups.
Yeah right, it would be manslaughter at best and and decent lawyer could probably get AJ off on self-defense.
What, no prison sex?
7383738 not to mention the wrongful accusations made by the moron officer against Sorin and leaving no one in the prison would cost them their jobs as well as a probable lawsuit.
What kind of police does Ponyville have!?
Seriously, they're just as bad as the police from "Rambo: First Blood"
I betcha that Judy Hopps would've handled the situation better than how those blockheads did!
7389833 I guess not. I know it wouldn't be the same, but if it makes you feel any better, they could probably break in and do it just-about any other night.