Applejack wins Soarin in a charity fundraiser and now the Wonderbolt has to do whatever she says for the entire weekend. Which would be nice as long as her nervousness and secret crush she has for him doesn’t hold her back. Anthro ponies.
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Who is Rainbow Dash paired with?
4157458 Thunderlane
Coco Pommel returns. Nice.
Hey, so long as the story progresses, I'm good.
Clop's just a bonus to a good story.
I must say, I found this chapter quite enjoyable, although Rainbow's issues are bugging me now. Also, Coco having the hots for Rarity is hilarious. Spike's got some competition!
...and I now have the mental image of a fic where Spike and Coco conspire to create a scenario where they both get to have their way with Rarity, ending with Rarity being completely okay with it. Assuming a previous Sparity ship, "Spike, if you wanted to expand our herd, you could have just asked."
Also, would love to see the girls in those flower dresses in a picture.
Nice to see that Coco's back!! I like that mare, she's literally a heart of gold. It's just great that not only does Coco has such a gracious employer like Rarity, but that Rarity also has somepony like Coco as her appentice, if not her no.2 (Spike's obviously her no.1 after herself).
Now this part:
That just bugged me the wrong way, but that's possibly more because I admit that I have perverted ideas. But seriously, she should really get over it. Even with Spike being forced to leave the room temporarily for "professionalism and modesty", it's not like nopony or drake in the store haven't seen anything before. So Applejack's the pony that doesn't wear bras, so what? I'm sure that Fluttershy does as well, and we know from previous chapter that Rarity "conviniently" was braless today as well. Another thing, Rarity's occupation allows her to deal with it, both personal and professional. And Twilight has conviniently been rutted by both Princesses Celestia and Luna in futa form more times than needed, no need for modesty for her.
And as for the entire chapter as a whole---Again, Applejack, your best friends are really putting you on the line for potential romance because you allowed your loneliness to come to a head. And basically all parties involved care so much about you that they want you to be happy. The absolute least you could do is appreciate it and stop trying to be a wuss and chicken out as Rainbow Dash said before.
Damn, sounds like Rainbow isn't sure she wants to be in a realtionship with Thunderlane. Hopefully she'll come around.
BTW, did you pair Twilight and Pinkie with anypony?
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Twilight was paired with the Princesses.
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Twilight's special someponies are Princess Celestia and Princess Luna. That's from A Weekend Maid from Spike.
Pinkie's is Caramel.
4157919 Where was it mentioned Pinkie is with Caramel?
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In chapter 1 of this, here's the transcript:
I know I didn't have to put in the entire transcript, but I just wanted to make sure that it is in proper context. Proof, if you will. The aforementioned is bold, italic and underlined.
lol no pls no y u do dis FlemFlomBrudas y u hurt mi in suzh maner?
Fucking nosebleeds...
What the actual fuck fuckity fuck fuck xDD
This is just... LMAO
Though if she ends up being right I swear I'll fucking end someone...
Coco's appearance was awesome addition, seriously it was fucking pefect. Big ups for doing that.
btw I can't wait to see some action >:D
Also, I swear you need to make a cream pie-joke, you know when >:3
Enjoyed the chapter. The fact there was no clop was totally fine with me. I actually had forgotten this was a clop until the end when you mentioned it.
Can't wait to see more.
I gotta say, I didn't think Rainbow Dash would get so defensive over her "thing" with Thunderlane. Though this is a Soarinjack story, will we be touching base with Thunder Dash in a separate chapter? Maybe theor own story later?
Think you just mean 'cuffs' here... unless this is also a kinky party!
Huh, so Coco has the hots for her boss. Eh, I can understand why.
...flower wars? Okay, time to sedate Pinkie for the night!!
4158054 Weird how it's not explored more in this story. It's only been mentioned once.
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We may possibly get more info with the others as far as the story goes. We can figure it out from how Rainbow talks about her times with Thunderlane pretty concretely. Same with Fluttershy, despite how little she tells all about her time with Will. Spike and Rarity's times are told ad nauseum in Weekend Maid for Spike, same as Twilight's partners. This story is basically all about Applejack and Soarin' getting together.
I guess we definitely need to get more info about Pinkie and Caramel, don't we? It'll come in time though...
Also I have to make a little caveat: This story is an AU of Weekend Maid for Spike---basically this is going off the ending where Spike decides to just stay with Rarity, and not try to hook up with everypony else. Hence, why everypony else except Applejack and Twilight (same partners, regardless of ending) have hooked up with somepony else instead of everyone favorite drake.
4158748 I do want to know more about Pinkie and Caramel became a couple.
I'm liking this "Ponies commit genocide against flower ponies and wear flowers to flip them the bird" thing. So very out of character for the ponies, and yet so very right.
Flower Wars?
This needs to be a thing. Someone needs to make this a thing!
hello? Is this still alive?
This story...
It's TOO good to just be for clop.
Coco swings that way? Saw it coming a mile away.
Decided to come back and read through the story again, there are some minor errors that should probably be taken care of, I hope this helps a little
judging by the wording around this one it looks like you meant "stripped", this is an easy mistake to make so it's understandable, can still change the meaning of the sentence if you aren't careful.
It never hurts to go through the chapters every once and a while to see if you can spot any errors.