Applejack wins Soarin in a charity fundraiser and now the Wonderbolt has to do whatever she says for the entire weekend. Which would be nice as long as her nervousness and secret crush she has for him doesn’t hold her back. Anthro ponies.
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Well right now probably the only thing keeping those two from going at it in the kitchen when he tries that pie will be Granny Smith's presence.
...is it weird I have this mental image of, after he tries the pie, them staring at each other for a while, their intentions plain, and then Granny handing him a condom while saying she's going to take a nap in the barn?
she is going to mess up the pie, i just know it
4944710 Well shit, I was going to do that, but now I have to come up with something else or it'll look like I copied you!
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No you don't. I'm just happy I guessed right!
4944752 Nope, too late. Already rewrote it!
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Aww...it would have been hilarious!
4944730 No no, you should write it that way if it was your original intention. Someone else having the same idea after reading this chapter just means that they're in tune with where things are headed, no need to change it.
You could always just give Tatsurou some credit for thinking of the same situation that you had planned if you're worried about looking like a copycat.
But seriously, go with your original idea, with your writing style I think it would be awesome!
4944768 Noooooo! Oh well, I'm still going to love it.
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4944787 Lol, it's okay guys. I have an idea for the realization scene--I mean... we don't know that Soarin' will recognize the pie :3
I smell a bitched attempt..oh but with the probably clop next chapter... Oh well, to the romance and clop!!!
I can smell the realization, it's parallel to Weekend where it was over a meal and (Weekend was a meticulously made kinky dinner by Rarity, here it's at first glance a normal lunch by Applejack) then the confession and both sides start to be more comfortable and more loving to each other...
....wait, that may be the cinnamon in the apples.....naaahwe can kinda hint what could happen in the next chapter
I have a feeling that granny Smith has already figured it out, I don't know how, it's just kinda old maternal instinct....
Once he gets a taste of AJ's apple pie, he is soon going to be eating another Apple "pie"!
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Oh! What if he sees her Gala dress? With as distinctive as the design was, he's sure to remember it, especially as it will probably still have the scents of the apple cart she was selling from. Scent memory is probably even stronger in ponies than in humans.
Rain huh? I think I know what's coming, having seen and used that picture myself!
And damn, with all that tension it's a surprise they didn't just go at it in the orchard, forger his search!
Oh god, when he finally realizes she is the pie mare he is going to be on her like shit on Velcro.....this is going to be deliciously messy.
About dayum time. This story is the biggest cock tease ever.
Oh, it's still a great story! Just a tease.
All I kept thinking was that Spike had it a lot easier in his story than Soarin' does in this one. Still a good read and I like a build up.
Almost time for the moment of truth, dear Applejack. 'Twould be a shame if you...choked.
Nice chapter, but there's one point that I think might be a typo.
4955876 Nope! that's the name of the apple!
4956379 wait! so if Maigold is part of the Apple family then, who is Wolf River?
4955876 that's what I thought too until, I looked it up. there apparently a list of them http://www.orangepippin.com/apples/a it's kind of crazy how many there are, it also explains why Apple family so big. (ignore the bad pun)
4958671 Considering all the jokes, it wouldn't surprise me if those two were cousins.
4959381 well? It isn't like it's illegal in some countries. So you're probably right, although I rather hope it was just a inherit name. You know when you marry someone and you can take their last names, yeah something like that.
Hmm that authors note at the end. Hearing rain? Possibly clop? Could the next.chapter have any relation with a certain SoarinJack pic that Pia did?
That should be "Fluke," not "Flook."
you sob you left me hanging
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That or either Spitfire or Pinkie throwing a condom through the open window, hitting his head.
Agh, don't leave us hanging!
While I in no means wish to rush this, I really wish these chapters would come out more often. I'm really enjoying the story here... Also, I wouldn't mind a bit more clop.
OH. MY. GOSH. NOOOOOO!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! you NEED to contenue!!!!!!! he is about to eat the pie and figure out AJ is the mare he was searching for you cannot leave me hanging like this bro! It's not right!!!!
I'm giving this a fav AND tracking. Yeah. That's how much I like this.
Oh, and I love Rogue Diamond as well. Might as well tell you when I have the chance.
When will the next update be? I'm not trying to rush you or anything. It's just that 8 would like to make sure there will be more or if something might have happened because I read the last chapter when it first came out. Which was quite a while ago. Thanks for making the great stories.
I know it's been a while since the story wrapped up, but will you be going back through the story and be making some minor changes to give some characters, like Applejack's parents, their cannon names in the series proper?
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probably not :P