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why do I get the feeling I'm going to regret this...
A STORY
BY YOU
Oh boy, I'm a little scared for what sanity I have left.
*unzips pants*
Jesus Christ
Fap time
wat
This is going to be bad for everyone involved...
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Danke.
2661924 No prob.
When next chapter?
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No idea.
2661932 pls write moar ;_;
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Incomplete for a reason ^ ^
2661940 My orgasm is incomplete
So I got about half way until I decided that I was anarchophobic and I didn't want any nightmares.
But what the hell do I know about fetishes.
*guards sanity*
I came.
Brilliant.
I wonder if they'll eat their way out of the pony?
Could've been better, but what do you care?
i.imgur.com/spVrM.gif Still immensely terrified of spiders.
i.imgur.com/xykft.gif
Why did I know it would be you who wrote this?
Ever since I saw your comment on the "worst way to die" blog, I knew you would do this.
Why is it always Berry Punch, with giant insects? Not that I'm complaining.
Oh man the YouTube video was funny as fuck
Haven't read, but to answer the question in your description, yes, yes getting wrapped up in web for this purpose does count as bondage.
Screw arachnophobia! I'm reading it.
Edit: This made me feel sick.
GREAT WORK
shes guna die when they hatch though
Oh God, how could this happened to us? No, we read what the spider does!
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D:<
NO SPERLERS GEEZ
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I read that comment four times before I saw what you pointed out
0.0
Wha.... Uh.... What did I just read?
(Stares at his computer for a moment).
Well... uh... Ok then.
Your grammar is not very good and needs a bit of work and you need to pace your story more. I came across a few spelling mistakes but aside from all of this..... it wasn't painful to read nor did it bore me.... it sickened me....
But atleast it didn't bore me.
This is probably one of the weirdest stories I have read but uh.... not the worst.
I recommend you pace yourself a little more and not jump into the whole raped by a spider that emits lust venom from its fangs immediately.... it doesn't really make sense but eh, what ever floats your boat.
Good luck with your future writing cause... I probably won't touch this story again...
4.5/10
-Rezz
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Damn them spelling mistakes! But grammar not good?
Anyway, yeah, I'm not a good writer; too much telling, not enough showing... I'ma gonna try and improve for the next one, hopefully I actually do.
Thanks for a fair review
2668961 No problem
._.
Well, that was interesting.
2668846 I do not want her to die if they hatched. I want her ALIVE!
Well, you just fucked me up. My turn! th03.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2012/190/f/d/never_stop_smiling_by_sharktino-d56npyn.png
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Swagthesto did it first.
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lol dead.
Giant spider eh? Just read a Godzilla fic with some Kumonga x Mothra action, so I'm all game.
I'm probably having the wrong reaction here, but this story is hilarious so far. I hope the next chapter has the spider release Berry, then when she finds her way back to Ponyville she decides to embrace her newfound surrogate motherhood and raises the baby spiders like her own. She can even try to convince Cheerilee to let the baby spiders become students at the school.
*sits in corner and cries*
MORE!!!
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All in good time.
Yeah, everyone knows that male spiders don't have those, and that they deposit the stuff from glands w their mandibles to the female. Duh
(also, just kill me if I'm wrong. K, bye
)
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Yeah, when writing this, I totally forgot spiders have mandibles.
2927606 Human things happen.
So my friend linked me to this because he knows I like 'what the fuck?' kind of shit.
mfw after reading the description (also, his response)
i.imgur.com/riqkR21.gif
http://i.imgur.com/riqkR21.gif
And now after reading the whole thing...
i.imgur.com/MrBPY8G.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/MrBPY8G.jpg
2779491, still want MOAR!
You know what, this is enough internet for one night, if you'll excuse me I'm going to go play Dead Space and take my feelings out on Necromorphs...and leave without my signature, and without letting Eli comment either. I feel like a god right now.
2718476 Dude, dafuqs wrong with you?
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He's dead, you know that?