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MerlosTheMad


Greetings, I am Merlos the Mad. I am a dabbler of both words and wizardry in my free time. I also invite you all to partake in my musings. Take care though, as they are the product of a madman.

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Firstly, Lords and Ladies, I would like to disclose a simple disclaimer. This story here? Is not my own, oh I wrote it, but the characters and on-goings belong to the one and only Hoopy Mcgee. (Who graciously blessed off on this.) If you haven't read his works, then shame on you!! Not really, but they are highly recommended not only for their quality, but their intrigue... Now, please enjoy a little one shot I whipped up out of respect for the ol' Hoopy, with his permission of course.

The Original Story
School of Hardknocks

This isn't where I belong. I left all this behind years ago, moved on with my life. But a mare from my past brought me back, and now she won't let me go. So I'm stuck here, trying to make the best of it with ponies that don't understand me, don't even like me. But when something moves in the darkness, and when things go wrong in the cold, dead night, they'll turn to me to try to set things right.

Why? Because once a police pony, always a police pony.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 42 )

Fanfics of a fanfic?

Ok... now I need to go read Hoopy's fic... shouldn't have waited so long, and I know his stuff is top-notch.

blargalnesh my god i had first like my god its good and i can read the other parts befor yall lol k bye and this was good yay!

Sweet Celestia, she had better not think about trying to get me into school...

But how else is he suposed to meet Plum and find a way to contact Zecora without his mother knowing it?:pinkiehappy:

2452932

Hehehe, well he'll see the brighter side to it eventually. :pinkiehappy:

EDITEDITEDIT!!!!! Dun wanna sound stupid.

2453060I asked what fanfic this was a fanfic of....:twilightblush::twilightoops::twilightsheepish::facehoof::unsuresweetie::applecry::fluttershbad:

2453064

Lol click on hoopy's name?

2453082I did. I forgot about School of Hard Knocks....

What is this...?
Oh, Merlos, I worry sometimes...

Fanfic-ception

CLICK

We must go deeper.

On my "Read Later" list. Stuff to do...

2453704

That button made my day

I can't (but must) wait for part 2.

Wow, was I lucky to fall on this one. Seriously, just barely made it, and I would have been missing out. Now I have 2x SOHK, and 2x Merlos. That's two, two times the fun!:pinkiehappy:

Great job on this Merlos! I feel that you really nailed the situation that Cinnamon is in; as well as the overall feel of the story.

Can't wait until the next part.

Oh and I am glad to have made your day. :twilightsmile:

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2x Merlos would surely implode the fabric of the universe. :rainbowderp:

There are so many side stories in this universe that need to be heard but would take the main story off course or cause Cinnamon to take a page out of Pinkies book and beat the author senseless.

Keep going, this should be good.

I wonder what will happen with Cinnamon next?

Comment posted by TwizzleDragon deleted Apr 21st, 2013

I'm seriously enjoying this, if only we had the story about that dress.

It's edumacatin time!

AH NEEDLES

...are they gone? Phew...

WHAT'S THAT, DON'T RHYME OR USE ALLITERATION SO MUCH?

There were rhymes and alliterations? I guess I'm not very observant today. This is excellent. I'd love to see more.

2482229

Admittedly I removed a few, but I think I left some in. Haha

Sorry, you'll have to follow Hoopy's stories to get more Cinnamon, I just wanted to tip my hat to him a little. As for more of my stuff and characterization techniques I do have five others wonderful stories beggering for attention. :ajsmug:

I love this so much. I know it's complete, but is there anything wrong with having more?

Anyway, now a grammatical error.

I like it alot,

There's a difference between "allot" and "a lot." You got neither.

2482276

Haha no there isn't anything wrong with it, and I've considered other shorts, like an insulting trip to the toy store for stuffed animals or some such. But like I said I have many many other stories, and I can't divert attention from them if they're ever going to get done. ^^

Also, that was the author's note, author is allowed to have bad gramar en thar. ;P

2482288 Hm. Makes sense, I suppose.

2482276 Guess, what - it's in the dictionary; thanks for playing.

Gotta say, this works very well in transitioning from Why Am I Pinkie Pie? to School of Hard Knocks. In both "filly" stories, I can hear the cop's thoughts in this voice reminiscent of Bogey.
If you have yo ask, you're on your own.

2509449 I'm not talking about whether "allot" is in the dictionary or not; I'm talking about how it's used.

Don't know why I didn't fave this before, though I did give it a thumbs-up... Taken care of!

Yes, being a kid with an adult mind must suck.

Just when you think life can't kick your flank even more...

Yo Mickey! I think that tooth stole your gloves!

2453704

Whoa. So this is where I got the button from.

Did you know this has been my homepage for almost a year now?

"We must go deeper..."

/overused inception reference

HAPPY BRTHDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!:pinkiehappy:

4130894 not a bad job. Nice to see the grumpy sailor before plum came along again.:twilightangry2: (where is a pirate mlp emoji when u need it!):derpytongue2::rainbowwild:

I hate the situation our poor cop is in. Though this was certainly fun to read.

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