This was... actually quite good.

Yeah, I suck at constructive critisism.

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O...M....F....G....

this is so.....it's just.....no words can describe.....

I love you, man. I love you

Here's 50 yays

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at first i was like hmmmmmmmmmmm i might like this story then i was like DAMN I DO LIKE THIS STORY (not clopping like although) then i was like HOLY SHIT when the princess broke the news to spike and fluttershy.

btw can you continue this in a sequl story or just update this one plz i would like to know what happens with the foals.

......That was the most BEAUTIFUL clop/love fic I have ever read.
Its just so amazing.... Its hard to find the right way to describe it.
Tears of joy.. lots of them, and a slow clap are needed
Also as from the non mushy side; DEM CLOP SECTIONS
But honestly... One of the BEST stories I read here, thankyou so much for this

Very well written and beautifully delivered story. With or without the clop this is a fantastic story. I loved every chapter I can't wait to see more work by you.yours sincerely, Shawn Edward Ward

at first i was thinking it was some goofy porno but it got really good toward the end. bravo!

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I saved ya a seat!

>> Deathsia thanks, i hear its warm there year round
but in all seriousness this is a riot and a half

That was the most awsome romance story!!!! I rate it five stars

interesting.

haha, this story is awesome!

couldn't stop reading and really enjoyed it!

I actually applauded after I read this. It touched my heart.

The only thing that could have made that ending funnier was if Celestia had been lying...

This was an amazing story, felt a little bit short but it was very well placed and i loved it congratulations
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Lordzid

way to go

It was a amazing book! Please make a second :)

U R officily awsome

I only have one thing to say about the scene where the Mane 6 and Spike start getting it on:

"Can you feel the love tonight"
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God damnit pinkie you physco wizard

Well I like the first part. I do wish spike was a little larger though. I gotta say I lost interest when rainbow was into girls.