Canterlot Orphan Twilight Sparkle receives a surprise when Princess Luna offers to take Twilight as her personal protege. Under Luna's tutelage, a new Valkyrie is born.
7462142 7462111 Now now, don't get excited. So many dead fics update once like a year later then die again outright. Until a pattern establishes itself, it's just death throws.
............................................................................................................................................................... update i most be dreaming, i have to be dream,
no not dream dam it, got to reread everything now........
7462109 This is a direct continuation of Chapter 9, so there hasn't been hardly any current time that has passed. However, Trixie and Sunset and the rest of the Valkyrie's military force are the direct result of the end of Back to the Past 1, which took place the usual thousand years ago. I even flat out state that Trixie is the daughter of Bright Spark, who passed on her legacy to her daughter.
7462111 7462142 7462199 ..... Challenge accepted. Looks like no sleep for me, onwards to finishing the next chappie.
7462247 Posting an update on Android while at work is a pain in the arse. Thanks.
7462300 You are correct, and this was a whoops he caught after I decided Luna should not have the capacity to raise the sun.
7462354 I have a bad habit of self-resurrecting when I should just stay dead, eh?
7462408 I told readers ages ago that I planned on having this story marked as "mature" as soon as a scene that warranted it occurred. Well, it happened. Thanks for the support, though!
7462508 Just got off work around midnight, eh? Heh, I've already been at work for an hour by midnight, 1240AM right now. I'm happy to see this story return, by the way.
7462438 Oh, certainly not complaining about the rating shift or anything! I'm just imagining one or both of them receiving an unexpected call at an inopportune moment...
Well, good to see it won't be one of those dead fics that spaz out in agony once a year or so just to be abandoned and die immediately after.
I'll still withhold from reading this chapter until at least the next one comes. And even then I'll probably just start reading it from the beginning since, damn, it's been so long I don;t even remember what was this story all about.
I tried to comment last night but my intrernet decided right then to start acting up thanks cox, blankin'ty blankin' blanks!anyway
If anything managed to make it past the warding of her throne or regalia, it was highly unlikely a little defensive matrix like that would be of any use.
Luna is HOW old AND has been a sole ruler for how long? She should know by now that that one little redundant "trinket" that shouldn't be of ANY use, the one that is over looked is usually the one that quote/end quote SAVES THE FRIKKEN' DAY! Especially when you take into account that THIS little trinket is a magical "doctrine" combination, nature and Necromancy
Looking forward to more but first I'm going to have to go back and reread this, I'm missing lore somewhere
This has been one of those stories that just sticks in your memories popping up again and again at random times no matter how long its been since you read it last, for me.
Glad to see that you are continuing it, just reread it myself and its going to be fun seeing how this story pans out.
For me this story is one of those that has this feeling of greatness in a fulfillment sence. It feels like this story is a right story for the universe and he characters as you portrait them.
IT'S ALIVE!!! Thank you so, so much for continuing this story. Your work is what lured me into the pony fandom. Will this little gift be a Chekov's gun?
7581089 To be fair, I warned readers that I would add and/or remove tags as needed when I first started this. I had always planned on Valkyrie to be a fairly mature story-- but there was no reason to add the Mature tag until I actually had content that warranted said tag-- there is a reason that mods are usually pretty strict about proper tagging, and I interpret that rule as keeping tags off a story until said story has a reason to have that tag.
...I kinda got lost with this new chapter. Was Trixie in the story earlier? How much time has passed?
Your... your alive?
I'm going back to bed guys, I must be dreaming.
Welp time to re read this story since I forgot all the shit that happened
alive... alive...
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Now now, don't get excited. So many dead fics update once like a year later then die again outright. Until a pattern establishes itself, it's just death throws.
YESSS I can finally put this back were it belongs
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Have Faith T.T
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update i most be dreaming, i have to be dream,
no not dream dam it, got to reread everything now........
The quadrupled raced through the trees
It's hooves never hit the same spot
other casters she had meet before
They was a charming little half smile
1. Quadruped.
2. Its.
3. Met.
4. There.
Not sure if that pendant is bait or...
So a year and a half later... You suddenly return.
Well how about that xP
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Thanks for updating.
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7462142 That is not dead which can eternal lie; and with strange aeons even death may die.
Great to see this updating! That's uh... one heck of a link Trixie and Sunset have to their boss!
7462109 This is a direct continuation of Chapter 9, so there hasn't been hardly any current time that has passed. However, Trixie and Sunset and the rest of the Valkyrie's military force are the direct result of the end of Back to the Past 1, which took place the usual thousand years ago. I even flat out state that Trixie is the daughter of Bright Spark, who passed on her legacy to her daughter.
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7462199 ..... Challenge accepted. Looks like no sleep for me, onwards to finishing the next chappie.
7462247 Posting an update on Android while at work is a pain in the arse. Thanks.
7462300 You are correct, and this was a whoops he caught after I decided Luna should not have the capacity to raise the sun.
7462354 I have a bad habit of self-resurrecting when I should just stay dead, eh?
7462408 I told readers ages ago that I planned on having this story marked as "mature" as soon as a scene that warranted it occurred. Well, it happened. Thanks for the support, though!
7462438 Well. I was not expecting a response that quick. Most people don't burn the candle this far into the night.
7462468 Just got offa work, its was only just after midnight when I replied.
I'll just leave this here.
i am glad to see this gem being shined again. ^_^
7462508 Just got off work around midnight, eh? Heh, I've already been at work for an hour by midnight, 1240AM right now. I'm happy to see this story return, by the way.
7462438 Oh, certainly not complaining about the rating shift or anything! I'm just imagining one or both of them receiving an unexpected call at an inopportune moment...
7462508 Are we gonna have to wait another year and a half for the next chapter?
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
2:13_8/8/2016
YEAH this stories back in buisness!
I don`t even remember any of this story anymore its been so long.
It's hooves never hit the
Its*
oh wow. Is there a fast way to uncheck all the chapters? It's been... 19 mouths sense the last chapter??
i remember liking this story and I want to do the newest chapter justice by remembering past chapters.
Glad to see this is back! I can't wait for the story to continue.
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Well, good to see it won't be one of those dead fics that spaz out in agony once a year or so just to be abandoned and die immediately after.
I'll still withhold from reading this chapter until at least the next one comes. And even then I'll probably just start reading it from the beginning since, damn, it's been so long I don;t even remember what was this story all about.
It lives! Maybe? Hopefully!
I need to reread this story. I can't remember the beginning.
I tried to comment last night but my intrernet decided right then to start acting up thanks cox, blankin'ty blankin' blanks!anyway
Luna is HOW old AND has been a sole ruler for how long? She should know by now that that one little redundant "trinket" that shouldn't be of ANY use, the one that is over looked is usually the one that quote/end quote SAVES THE FRIKKEN' DAY! Especially when you take into account that THIS little trinket is a magical "doctrine" combination, nature and Necromancy
Looking forward to more but first I'm going to have to go back and reread this, I'm missing lore somewhere
The necklace... I sense either a Red Herring or a Chekhov's Gun... Hard to tell at this point...
What's applejack been doing this whole time?
7464432 Probably Applejacking off somewhere
Ohhh much re-reading to be done 0.0
7464767 Hah. I'm reading that story now .
woo-hoo, glad to see you back!
hmmm, nope, I don't remember what this is.
Gonna have to reread this whole thing. Can't remember anything.
also I know the song's old but I think it fits the story
I just finish reread this story.....
and I still enjoy it a lot.....
About time I see an update! You don't seem to realize how good this story is!
I really hope to read more of this soon!
This has been one of those stories that just sticks in your memories popping up again and again at random times no matter how long its been since you read it last, for me.
Glad to see that you are continuing it, just reread it myself and its going to be fun seeing how this story pans out.
For me this story is one of those that has this feeling of greatness in a fulfillment sence. It feels like this story is a right story for the universe and he characters as you portrait them.
Looking forwards to the future.
Martin ablue
I love it!
IT'S ALIVE!!!
Thank you so, so much for continuing this story. Your work is what lured me into the pony fandom.
Will this little gift be a Chekov's gun?
Please continue!
it lives
7568749 you are not the only one to think this!
Let me guess, you got stuck in a writer's block and you decided "oh f##k it" then turn on the mature tag.
7581089 To be fair, I warned readers that I would add and/or remove tags as needed when I first started this. I had always planned on Valkyrie to be a fairly mature story-- but there was no reason to add the Mature tag until I actually had content that warranted said tag-- there is a reason that mods are usually pretty strict about proper tagging, and I interpret that rule as keeping tags off a story until said story has a reason to have that tag.