After a stunt goes wrong, Rainbow Dash starts to think Ponyville would be better off if she were never born. Can a certain Zebra convince her otherwise?
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This was... good to an degree but I fell like its missing something.
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Something like a left-alignment, for starters.
>>Bluecatcinema
Is this a story or a poem? I'm going to have to guess it's really bad poetry, because stories are never center-aligned.
Celestia forbid that a story not be written just like all the others.
I do think that it would make a much better story if it was expanded with more details. However at the rate you are writing I understand. Sometimes it just has to get on paper NOW the muse waits for no one.