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Crystalis McCloud


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Three years have passed since Princess Twilight's coronation, and unseen by anypony, changes have started to take hold. Visitors have worked their way into Equestria, humans pulled from their world, each thinking they're alone or not remembering their humanity at all. They have taken places in the daily life of Equestria, and have gone largely unnoticed. Not only that, but a new princess becomes the talk of Equestria, a Princess of Death which strikes terror into any who see her, her malevolent presence shaking them to their core.

This is the tale of the princess, the humans, and the one who changes everything. Come read along and see where their entwining destinies lead, and how Equestria is changed forever.

A Vixin Mccloud and Draconia Crystalis joint work.

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Comments ( 9 )
Comment posted by Dzone16 deleted May 15th, 2013

I like it, well written and overall grammar and spelling are in check. I am definitely wanting to see more.

I must agree with that, I want to see more chapters, and soon. :raritystarry:

I like it, and will just read it again, so I'm ready to read the next chapter when it's done. :rainbowdetermined2:

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Drac: Glad to see that it is garnering attention. I can't wait to get the first chapter up. It's gonna be a longer piece, and me and my Co-writer have been working on it for a while. Readers should expect pretty long chapters updated a bit irregularly, since we don't plan to commit to a schedule. Wish me and Vixy luck!

My body is ready for this awesome story XD

I really like the set-up and I'm looking forward the first chapter even more. But tell me, is there to be a romance between these two here?

I wouldn't mind seeing something like that :twilightsmile:

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I think it's no mystery that there will be one, but it's gonna be slow to develop and we're gonna take our sweet time making it have its dysfunctions later in the story.

If you read this story backwards, it makes no sense, but if you read it backwards from that it would! I like this by the way...

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Glad you do. Though this story has been put on hold while I build up to it in a different way than I originally planned in the story Two Emerald Hearts, focusing on one of the many ponies that will become important to this story.

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