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Crystalis McCloud


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After the battle against Ragyo Kiryuin, Senketsu did not truly perish.

Traveling across the universe as a Primordial Life Fiber, he falls to a new planet in pursuit of a dangerous enemy and must now fight to protect this world from destruction. His only hope rests in mysterious boy who takes him to a school full of talented youths in search of one who can wear Senketsu and unleash his power. They will fight with everything they have to prevent the scourge of Life Fibers from claiming another planet.

A Kill la Kill crossover.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 54 )

good work on the first chapter, a great opening. this is the fan fiction I've been waiting for since the last episode aired on hulu. keep up the good work. one question tho, will the mane 6 be getting 3star uniforms? or will they try and recreate the Kamui for each of them. no need to answer that last one, just needed to voice the question.

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I'm still figuring out my plans for the Mane 6 for the most part, but I do know who Senketsu is going to be worn by. Emerl won't be his true partner, but just wore him for this occasion. I will say, however, that I will be creating some of my own dynamics because when you throw in magic the rules we knew in Kill la Kill can most definitely be stretched a bit here and there. Still, there will of course be limits, but I want this to be an evolution of the original concept, not just retreading the same old things.

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Already working on the second chapter. Depending on how much I write and how fast, I might just reach the point where I have to wait until Friendship Games airs before I can continue. This story, while showing events of Equestria Girls and Rainbow Rocks, will be largely focused on the third movie, as is probably obvious from the fact that Emerl and Coco are ex-Crystal Prep students.

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that's good to hear, one of may main peeves in fan fiction is that people don't take enuf liberties with the martial they are using, when there is so much potential for originality. also my guess for Senketsu's partner, its ether going to be Sunset Shimmer or Rainbow Dash, strongly leaning towards Sunset because of the similarity with Ryuko.

6389639 Ding Ding Ding! We have a winner! The answer is Sunset Shimmer! Though Sunset is definitely going to have some tricks of her own. Sure, she'll use some recreated scissor blades at some point in time, but her primary weapon is going to be something special to her, a kind of weapon I always considered perfect for her, and just so happens to also be a pretty good one for fighting clothing.

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one more gift from Princess Celestia maybe?

6389799 Of sorts. Call it a bit of headcanon on my part.

Just so you know I'm planning on reading this; I just haven't finished watching Kill la Kill yet, :derpyderp1:

6411643 Haha, glad to know I already have your interest.

Excellent first chapter! I can't wait to see where this leads!

I want more !!(ya got me hooked dude keep it up!)

6389686 can't freaking wait for that, glad I got past the description of it being a boy(I thought he was going to be the only wearer but decided to give it a chance anyway), so keep up the good work

6412279 Yeah, he's kinda like Satsuki in that he's capable of wearing a Kamui, but Senketsu isn't meant to be his. It was just a spur of the moment usage. Granted, he's definitely paying for it so far in the second chapter as of this moment. I know that Senketsu being worn full time by a guy just wouldn't be right, no matter how compelling I make Emerl. He'll have his own means of being a badass, though.

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Glad I have your attention. And with the first scene of the next chapter, I'm sure I'll really sink that hook in deep.

I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.

An AU where Senkets lived past Kill la Kill's finale? Sir, you already have me hooked.

Favorited.

Is Sunset the host, she should be the host.

6583596 For the premise of this story, what pretty much happened at the Kill la Kill finale is just that Senketsu sent Ryuko down to earth with a shell of himself that he controlled remotely while his core went after Nui. He wanted to let her live freely and take care of Nui/Koketsu himself.

6583644 I've pretty much confirmed that in previous comments. :P Sunset will be Senketsu's host.

6583669 me neither next chapter please

Loving the story can't wait for the next chapter. :pinkiehappy:

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Next chapter is on its way. Already shaping up to be a fun one for me to write. About halfway done now and making fast progress.

6627490 Ohhhh I really can't wait now I'm sure it will be great.

6627563 Opening scene of Chapter 4 would probably make a pretty good standalone one-shot story too. :P

Very nice chapter. I loved it soo much, and I can't wait for the next chapter.

6630704 Also you are soo right about the first part of that making a good one-shot.

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Glad you all seemed to enjoy it so much. ^.^ This one was pretty fun to write, actually, and a lot of little things in it are building to what will happen in the next chapter. I hope the jokes got a reaction too. They just flowed out onto the paper for me in this chapter, what with Applejack mishearing Senketsu's name as Sam Kethup, (For those that don't get it.) and Pinkie's funny-farm bit. I hope I was able to get at least a little chuckle out of you all.

OMG EPIC. I loved the chpater can't wait for the next and I loved what happened with Sunset.

6722553 Thank you very much. I put a lot of thought and effort into this chapter, starting multiple ideas in the previous chapter just so that they could come together perfectly in this one. I hope that what happened with Philomena got an emotional reaction, as I was really aiming for a gut-wrenching feeling, but as the writer I find it hard to judge whether my work can get that feeling out of my readers since I know so much more about my own story in minutia and that affects my perception.

6722559 For me it was a really sad moment and you could feel for sunset. Again I just can not wait till tou give us the next chapter.

6722621 Good. I'm glad I got the reaction I was aiming for.

I look forward to showing you and all my other readers just what the Phoenix Gloves can do.

Sunset hatched Philomena and has met Ryuko? Niiiice~

6722665 A part of Ryuko, at least. The way I'm interpreting it, Ryuko and Senketsu each left a little piece of themselves in the other, which is my way of explaining how Senketsu's image appeared to Ryuko in the OVA episode. I don't know if Ryuko would have a normal human life span or not, but if she did, then she'd be long dead by the time this story starts. Senketsu and Koketsu were traveling through space for a long time.

6722700 Exactly, which is why I say that I don't know if she has a normal life span or not. Her human cells could very well age normally and pass away, and the life fibers in her would die with her, but at the same time they could very well extend her life and keep her young. There's no way of knowing for absolute sure given what's in the show.

Suddenly the Friendship Games just got a whole lot more interesting.
And I'm kinda interested in how the CMC getting their Cutie Marks would work out for human Applebloom, Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo in this universe.
So many images are running through my head right now.
Please, do continue to impress upon my imagination

So sunset is this ridiculous with just philomena, Imagine when she'll also have senketsu on.

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Philomena's ring and part of Senketsu, really. And do remember that according to the information I've provided more subtly, the sirens have only had a week of training with Goku Uniforms, so they aren't even quite at the level of the first time Ryuko fought any of the Elite Four.

Still, I hope you enjoy how this all turns out.

Finally got tired of waiting to finish KLK and started reading, :derpytongue2:

Really good so far! That whole bit with Philomena dying needlessly was a huge gut-wrenching risk, but I understand why it's necessary for the story (assuming you're going in the direction it seems like you are), and you handled what we've seen of the aftermath so far well. I was particularly happy to see Flash show Emerald exactly what he thought of his plan, :rainbowdetermined2:

Also, you really have a thing for gauntlets, don't you? :derpytongue2:

“We are Second Skin,”

... Man, it just doesn't have the same impact unless you have him say it like he's too sexy for his clothes, :trollestia:

7042650 I probably would have done something like that if Nudism was Emerald's thing, but at the same time, nothing can match the gleaming glory of Aikuro Mikisugi's nipples and crotch. I would be a fool to try to immitate it. Besides that, it would clash with his true ideal, symbiosis with Life Fibers. Glad you felt such strong emotion for Philomena, though. As the writer, it can be hard for me to tell if my story can pull those feelings out of my readers since I am desensitized to it from running it through my head hundreds of times.

Silly Adagio. You should have played video games.

Video games make it all better.

7049148 Yeah, but playing Halo (what I pretty much indirectly tried to infer they were playing) only helps so much before Dagi just needs to go break things with her own two hands. Especially with the particular frustrations she's dealing with.

Will Pinkie animate one of Mako's Hallelujah moments? And will she reenact them as well?

7174890 I honestly couldn't even come close to one of those moments, but I don't think anyone possibly could in written form. I'll do my best to give Pinkie some silly moments, but don't expect it to be exactly like Mako's in how she uses visual queues for each Japanese syllable. :rainbowwild: Heck, the outburst this chapter had some hidden meaning behind it, if you want to try figuring it out~

7175726 more chapters please

7176688 Haha, that's the plan. I'm working on it, for sure.

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