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TwiRaptor


Gone For Good

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This story is a sequel to Alien: Twilight Signing Out


The Alien attack on Voluntas Station is over! Twilight and White Lightning took what they could during the escape, including Scootaloo. With death clouding their minds they all hope that it is all over, that Gash is dead and that it will all stay in Voluntas. They dream that their lives will move on and that the events will rest as memories and that they will heal and make room for new, positive memories.

However dreams are called dreams for a reason. After being rescued and brought to Fortwaid station for medical treatment and rest. The organism returns and with it, the slaughter! Twilight Sparkle, weak, hurt, and afraid must once again fight to survive. Could it be the end of the Xenomorph, or will Twilight find her own ending...in death?

Artwork Created By NSilverDraws

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 60 )

Strong opening. :twilightsmile:

I just remembered that Sweetie Belle got caught by a facehugger in the other story. That spells a whole lot of uh oh.

After the first story I hate anypony entering vents

If I remember the ambulance craft from Alien Isolation correctly, the craft isn't exactly that big to or maybe it is. I don't know. I could only see the cockpit and that's it. Anyway it seems that they don't realize the danger that their in already, and I'm not talking about them being stuck in isolation for a few days. What I'm talking about is those Weyland bastards honing in on their beacon and the xenomorph in Sweetie Belle if you remember from the first story. That all spells trouble. Now if you'll excuse me I need to deal with something. *Grabs a jar with a facehugger in it and walks into another room holding a Weyland Yutani worker captive.*

7033814 I am not using the ambulance craft from alien isolation in this one, I tried my best to point this out by saying "Older model" or whatever it was that I said. They don't realize the danger they are in which is correct and of course I remember the facehugger, I am waiting for the right moment ^-^

There is much to come as the story progresses and the situations are only going to get worse

7034039 Ah now I understand the ambulance craft now. Let's hope White tells Twilight about what happened to Sweetie Belle. If he doesn't well that pretty much is his fault. Oh yeah and I just now remembered that the station they left had its orbital stabilizers destroyed. Please tell what happens to it when it crashes. Will the company find any surviving xenomorphs or will it land on top of a town or city. Oh the ideas on what happened. *Banging from another room.* Quiet in there! You'll get your chance soon enough. You know these type of stories make me type comments this long. Need to stop from typing long. Anyway I need to go to expand the hive some more so see you later. *Walks into the room the banging came from.*

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I guess time will tell on Sweetie Belle, I have allot planned for this sequel and allot of it involves the Xenomorph inside Sweetie Belle. I plan to make emotions flow and your comments being long are very helpful in proving I am getting somewhere, thank you!

White you have an encouraging voice. god dammit twi that thing is three inches long how did you trip :p Maybe you should get as brave as you were when you being betrayed by your bestest friends. or when a bunch of crazies were going to sacrifice you. or hell when you unleashed gash from a trap. come on girl get a grip. you practically told wayland to suck it back on valunats. Sorry twi but the thing is three inches long. Now we have a damn alien on board and I guarantee gash is the one who made that damn slime outside. so for the time being I'm going to say we have two aliens now. Come on white my dear oc of mine teach her to be a badass again :D

A facehugger and a chestburster roaming the ship. I have a feeling that this will end badly. Not only that but White failed to tell Twilight about the facehugger that got the unicorn filly. I wonder how Applejack and Rarity will react when they find out that their sisters are dead. R.I.P. Sweetie Belle and Applebloom. Also Fractured Heart, Iron Will and his wife, Silverstar, and all the other ponies of the Valuntas station. Even the crazies. Except the company for they can go burn in hell. Now that I think of it. *Grabs flamethrower and head into containment cells*

Stick it to the mare white that how it is done. Fuck poor coco owns fort waid... I heard all about that stations crappy environment in the last story. now we are gonna have gash in that station. He probably already made it inside. Hes gonna tear that place part. look what he did to the jumbo station of almighty will. God bless that captain. died awesomely. Damn you fort waid damn you~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! your so damn screwed.

Scootaloo unconscious and a dead facehugger. That looks rather obvious to me.

Stupid Weyland troops. They never learn their lesson. We all know what happens when the company gets a hold of even a facehugger. It gets out, finds a host, makes a xenomorph, and things go to hell real quick. That is why I hate the company but also because they try to use the creatures as weapons and show them no respect. To be blunt on my opinion of the xenomorph; they only want to expand and grow. Maybe if they were left alone or given some type of way that allows them to reproduce with infinite hosts maybe they and other races can get along. I put a lot of thought into the species and all they ever get is bullets being fired at them and experiments conducted on them when captured. Here's the company's true motto, Weyland Yutani destroying many worlds. Bastards they are.

Glad the picture looks good, also i'll say this lightly. GODAMMIT YOU DUMB COCO YOU DUMB DUMB PEICE OF....... YOU DUN FUCKED UP. also i might as well thank you for putting another oc of mine in this story. Just don't kill lily to brutally please.

7041921 I can try not too but if it she goes out hard then I promise she will go out with a fight, okay?

Let's just sit back, relax, and watch Weyland fail to contain something they never succeed in containing. Weyland Yutani destroying many worlds.

And theyre screwed, yea leave it to weyland red shirts soldiers to handle this sitaution xD

I am literally giddy to read this

7046380 I'm happy to hear you are! Just remember to read the first story first to better understand the story! Thanks for being giddy to read my story,Aliens rule

Sunset Sunset Sunset. Will you never learn how Weyland really works? They show no mercy for anyone, they are control freaks, and they know no limit to how stupid they are. I will admit that they are superior to any other company that try to space travel but still they are dicks. I hope that they are destroyed one day. Hopefully Gash and his new sibling bring Weyland Yutani to their knees and end them. Twilight and White, do us all a favor and expose the company for their wrong doing have them destroyed. The company doesn't deserve any mercy at all. Let them suffer for their stupidity.

My theory about Gash not killing Twilight was somewhat correct. Turns out that Twilight has a queen in her. Mind blowing. By the way TwiRaptor you should of made a better description of the royal facehugger. Here's what it looks like.
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Notice the thin skin between the legs and unique design. Other than it not being properly identified, or me not noticing that it had a description, the story is amazing and I love it. I wonder if Twilight will survive. Probably not but I have been proven wrong before. Keep up the great work!

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I know what it looks like, was having a writers block on describing it, I did the best I could and I am glad your liking the story!! Thanks for your support!

I have to say: this chapter was pretty good.

Higher quality than the other ones. Good job. :twilightsmile:

Oh those troops shouldn't have done that.:facehoof:

So that facehugger was the same one that sweetie got attacked by as well, I know that type carries a drone and a queen embryo

Thank you Sunset for betraying the bad guys. To be honest I could see some type of way that will let Twilight live when the story is finished. I keep saying it but we all know it's true but Weyland are nothing more than dicks and deserve no mercy no matter how good they look to be. If my xenomorph Shadow was there he would have pretty much have gotten rid of all Weyland employees with no trouble at all. The story is amazing and sometimes the wait for a chapter can get annoying. The suspense is killing me sometimes. Keep up the great work!

7055378 Three chapters left! I am glad to cause suspense in the wait but at least you know that they are usually a day span, thanks for your support as always :D

Gash nooo!!! You will be honored in my hive. The chapter was amazing but Gash dying really got to me. Weyland Yutani had done and killed him. They will pay with their lives. I'm happy to know that we will learn his origin. I had come real close to guessing it too. I'm beginning to think that something is up with the queen and Twilight. I won't say what I think until I thought it out carefully. This story has taken an interesting turn. Let's hope the other xenomorph will be able to pick up where Gash left off.

Coco was an android, rip coco :(

7056958 Rest peacefully, I wonder what you will think of the next chapter, its out

ok i would of liked this story but i cant read any storys were twilight diesit depresses me, if the queen is in twilight she is going to die because the only way i know they give birth is through face huggers and chest bursting and i cant stand to read this if that is the case

7058067 I understand your reasoning and Iam alright with it, however I have been known to surprise people with my endings and you never know what will happen.

7058325 if you can pm me and tell that twilight wont die i will give it a read

My theory was close to this. So transportation for the facehugger and implanting on one who wouldn't be remembered. Fueling break out strategy. Gets the company every time. Gash may have been a drone but he is a killing machine. I will begin to interrogate you on how the company even got rumors about xenomorphs. My guess is other aliens that found them. Like say a similar named company runned by humans perhaps.

And the big question is when the queen in Twilight wakes up. Great story and I have a feeling that there will be another story after this that will say what will happen to Twilight. I have the feeling that it's going in the Alien movie order sorta. I think? I feel like Alien: Resurrection in pony version will be the next sequel. I could be wrong but either way, great story!

oi OI i asked if she lives in the end and you said yes cryo freezing her does not make her live its still going to bust out of her

7061409 That is an assumption my friend, for in time her fate will be revealed, she lives and I did not lie she is alive at the end of the story.

Oxy

White entering the vents was reminding me of Soarin from the first story, now I always have a slight feeling something is in the vents with a character :twilightsheepish:

7100832 Yeah, that is something I was hoping to make readers feel in this story because of the first one, I was hoping to put people on edge

Oxy

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It's fairly often that the xenomorph's act more aggressive and are the ones who start the conflict. In my opinion they are most likely territorial, acting aggressive around their hive in Aliens and Resurrection, and assuming wherever they are born to be their territory like in Alien and Alien 3

Oxy

Agreeing to have Weyland's help is like agreeing to have everything go to shit

I had absolutely no idea that this was going to have a epilogue. It doesn't matter because Twilight has a chance at living. I wonder who was carrying her that made her fill with joy. I'm looking through my mind on this one. Let's see there's Celestia, Luna, one of the elements, Sunset, White, Discord maybe because that's possible, and who else. No one else comes to mind but them not being a unicorn scratches some off the list except for the Celestia and Luna because their alicorns or if it isn't them then who I wonder. All well again great work on this story and hope you can continue the other stories you have soon.

7101917 Weyland be assholes, enough said, this wont last long...right?

What would rarity and applejack feel now that there sisters are dead

7545942 That actually still has too come, it will come but not in this story. The filly deaths are tough and will forever be remembered. Rest in peace little ones~

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I agree.

I also Celestia's royal guards could do a better job and no offence but they're terrible at fighting.

Now that I think about a fight between the two groups would be like two Jar Jar Binks' fighting meaning that all bystanders are fucked

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You ever play isolation, I always got that feeling when I was in the vents

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