What happens when Rainbow Dash's favorite book character is a real pony? What about when Ditzy Doo doesn't want to talk to Rainbow about it?
Dash decides there is only one thing she can do: Investigate.
And she promises its not really stalking.
Cover art drawn by me
Nice writing.
The idea is quite common (even though a lot of people still don't really follow it).
The part with the three laughing mares was something I focused the most.
It weird to hear them say
and then laughed afterwards.
Jerks.
Also, the last DaringXDitzy fic I read made them sisters, in which Daring acts nothing like the book (more of a jerk).
I'd like to see what she acts like in this one.
I give you my moustache.
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Thanks for the comment!
I'm glad you brought that up because I really have never seen a DitzyXDaring Fic. I'll try and find one, that paring actually interests me.
About the laughing, I think I might want to fix that. They were suppose to be like making fun of her eyes, but I don't think I did a good job on that.
Thanks again for the positive feedback!
I encourage you to write more but regardless thank you for writing what you have so far I enjoyed it.
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Yeah I'm writing really slowly, sorry about that. As the school year is wrapping up there is so much I have to do, and with golf I get home at like 8:30 every night. Then homework, but I still have time to write excuses like this one Between the three stories I'm working on I have a system, so don't fret there is more.
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There is a good one called "The Sisters Doo"; you should give it a read.
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Thanks, I check it out.
2587196 "The Sisters Doo" is a good story. I read it a while back and it was rather fun and exciting.
I'll wait, as long as I know what's been happening, then you're good.