After Twilight has been raped and turned into a changeling

Yikes.

This is sort of relevant to my interests. Also, I prefer Twilight unvivisected This is based on the Clop Bin chapter, right?

-edit- only noticed the reference to the Clop Bin just now

Twilight is a changeling. Made by ShadowStalker. This is gonna be good.

I'll keep an eye on this I guess. A little too much dialogue for me and still needs a once over for simple things like "Princess, i need to send six letters. I need my friends here."

And Rainbow Dash is two words.

Also, loosed means to release. You were looking for loosened. This sentenceShe loosed her grip before quietly letting go.' effectively says "She released her grip before quietly releasing her grip."

And it's a little difficult to follow her memories when Celestia is reading them. Maybe put them in italics or something. I dunno.

Sorry for so much criticism, but I like contributing some how. Even if it's terrible contributions. I'm withholding my thumb for now, but if your second chapter is just a touch more polished, you'll get a thumb up from me. Favoriting so I know when to check. Good luck!

well i liked the story personally please continue with this story... it is... interesting

Nice take on a classic Faves liked and am watching intently.
Also Daaaw explosion
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thank you for writing this. As much as i love loyal2-1's stories, the ending of that particular one was really, really dark, and this is much better.

After Twilight has been raped and turned into a changeling

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That's pretty dark. Eh, I'll put it in read later.

1772861Guh...dwah.....GAHH!!!!!!!! *head violently explodes*
Twilight gets raped.........okay, sure.....LETS READ THIS!!

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@ Creed Miles

Thank you

@ Creed Miles

Thank you

Btw how do I continue to down vote?

Well ... that's an interesting way to create new changelings.

Why not just send one letter to Spike? He can gather the others without having to waste paper.

2179055 mmm, she's probably writing letters to them personally for each letter she sends would be unique to the reader.

Wait... I've read the prompt for this... It was a short story in a series of them...

I'll tell you what you want..." She sobbed. "But first, look through my memories."

"Why would I need to do that? It's not relevant to where my student went!"

Celestia why would you need to asks eh would remember where she took her.

Well we're not pulling any punches here!