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oh you~
Another great chapter.
"She responded with a hoof to the back of the head."
I laughed when I clicked the link, even before I did I thought of NCIS.
- T
You just made Freddy Krueger real sad.
Smart assery from a non-self thinking changeling? wow there is hope for the race yet!
"Casted" isn't a word. The word "cast" doesn't get an "-ed" at the end with past tense. Don't ask me why-- the English language is just weird like that sometimes. Also, "firefly's" and "changeling's" should be "fireflies" and "changelings". I see a few other common mistakes as well, such as improper comma usage.
As good as this story is, it'll be even better once you've read the FiMFiction writing guide.
Interesting, her magic was blue..