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I certainly hope that Twilight will tell them all to piss off.
Why didn't Twilight do anything?!!
ISAWWHATYOUDIDTHEREI'VEPLAYEDL4D2BEFORE.
Noticed one mistake,
He had a roll of gaws wrapped around his head, and a lump on each side.
should be gauze.
Other than that great chapter.
2282034 thats how the story is supposed to work, she gets captured while her tormentor (changeling) gets friggin owned and now poor spike doesnt know shit,
all and all a great story setup ^-^
DUN DUN DUN
Also since nobody is done it already
:O UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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No, she just stood there. SHE'S A QUEEN GODAMNIT!
2282143 Well honestly that is how stories work, no use in yelling at them
Cant tell you how many times ive raged a television show or a book going
WTF WHY YOU NO DO ________ IT COULD HAVE SAVED YOUR ASS!!!!
Btw you take the cake for the quickest reply XD
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How was that quick?! I received an email and answered.
2282190 to me it seemed like your reply was about a minute after I commented, since I usually read things at 12:00 am I usually don't get an answer for about 7 hours.
Answer your question?
Fuck
For some reason I see a new crater being made in the next few chapters.
I spotted a few mistakes to remedy.
Spelling Error:
It's spelled "gauze".
OOC Error:
"Teleported" is a bit awkward here. It doesn't seem to be a word Spike would use. For that matter, it doesn't sound like a word anyone except maybe Twilight would use. Even if this isn't a kids' fanfic, it's still based upon a kids' show. Words that are spoken by characters other than nerds must be kept relatively simple in order to stay in character. Thus, I suggest using the word "came" instead.
And if anyone makes a perverted joke about my suggested word choice, I will have no choice but to love and tolerate the out of that person.
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2283829 I shall now love and tolerate you.
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Just caught up after finding this story and I NEED MOAR!
This story had an interesting start, but there are too many things that don't make any sense.
this chapter alone: a farming community gets it's produce from a mountain city, a random stranger steals from a national hero knowing it can't end well for him, a powerful mage stands there and watches her stuff being stolen as her friend is in jeopardy, she invites a potentially dangerous person with a shady background to stay in her house (forgetting about somepony ), and she is on the verge of killing 1 changeling but does nothing to the other that actually wants to hurt her.
Yay L4d2 reference
Like, wat?