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I don't think the restaurant name is to bad. At least it isn't some horrible attempt at a bad joke.
2044148 It's a bit hard for me. I'm running out of bloody names!
2044169 That is fairly obvious. Luckily, "mare" can be fit into just about anything.
can't wait for hte next chapter. are you on a date thing for this? i'm not gonna have to wait a hole week for another chapter, right?
2044193 It's bad enough that I hat the names. Your killing what non-existent self-esteem I have. Stop agreeing with me, please?
2044203 I was working on the last few chapter for the sequel to Got wood? The Pinkie chapter is weird... And coming from me, that's saying something.
Ok I like this chapter but here's a few tips.
First of all you misspelled the title: it should read "For the Main Course..."
Secondly, you might want to remove the coma in the first sentence of this paragraph:
"The soup, was scolding. It was absorbed through her shell and bits of the root vegetable were stuck in some of the holes."
thirdly the last paragraph is written in present tense:
"Neither of them knowing of what lie's ahead in the morning."
Replace "lie's" with "lay" or something to that extent.
"Excuse me," a large olive green pony came up. He was wearing a ink blue business suit, a small name tag in gold was on his breast. "I'm so sorry for my... Ex-employee's outburst. You may consider the food on the house. You have my deepest apologies."
Why Do I have a feeling he is a changeling.
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It's possible he just cares more about customer service than what species a customer is. Profits and common courtesy go hand-in-hand.
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https://youtu.be/0yUQuH3Ub7U?t=22
It's been a few days, heck, even a week. Apparently these changelings don't need love to live of Twilight has been feeding all this time and nobody noticed...