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It's spelled "Mi Amore".
That statement just doesn't seem natural. It's something a more simple-minded person would say. Twilight Sparkle is not simple-minded. I would picture her reaction instead to be something more like this:
So is this some sort of covert attempt to turn Twilight against Equestria? If it is, I hope that Twilight tells her to stuff it.
damn it... it's like getting my favorite treat and eating it too quickly...
no offense but this seems kinda out of character,
I mean that would expect a victim of rape to destroy the person who ordered the attack not learn from them.
2478548 Well, would it be better if Chrysalis doesn't teach her and ruin the larger plan? I don't think it would fit well with the second story. Having the main character being killed... It kind of stops it a little.
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granted that you make a good point but, twi just rolls over and accepts her fate, there is no anger no rage and no mention of the main point of the story (i.e. twi gets raped and turned into a changeling).
Don't get me wrong this is a well done first meeting, but it seems to be out of place. It seems to me that it would be better in a story where twi is magically turned into a changeling, not one where she is raped.
2478673 She's going to get to fight her. And yes, she is going to try and find out why Chrysalis did what she did, and yes, there will still be apprehension. She knows that if she just lashes out at the queen, it would only end badly. She would have to then face an entire hive; she's just playing her cards right for the moment. There will be plenty of anger later.
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woohoo. cant wait.
If there was a gif that played fluttershy's "yay" over and over I would post a link to it.
Epic as allways! I do like the way you had Twilight deal with the situation, very well exicuted.
Now we get to learn a little more about the Changelings too! I can't wait!
2478633 (Just saw this little string of comments and want to add my two bits. Didn't specifically want to reignite the issue, so I'm only responding to the author.)
I don't think that Twilight was too ooc at all. Just as a character even. But, if someone were to argue that Twilight is keeping too level a head under pressure, I argue that that is exactly how her character is designed to be! She freaks out about small things but is outstanding under pressure. Case and point: she cryes and talks to puddles when she thinks she's tardy. Fragile right? No. When she's faced with an ACTUAL problem (i.e. Nightmare Moon, Discord, Sombra, Chrysalis (the first time)) she plants her hooves and fights them head on, keeping her fear and anger pretty well in check. All of them could have killed her at any point, and she knew that and kept fighting, so fear is not a problem. As for anger: Twilight was pissed at fake Cadence when she saw her casting a spell on her brother. What did she do? Charge madly in and kick her flank? No, she waited and attempted to expose her to a crowd, where she could not be openly attacked by the imposter. That shows that even under stress or when angry Twilight is able to keep focused and be analytical.
That is why Twilight's actions are not ooc.
At the start she didn't think why her magic wasn't working
Killed drone, huh?