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My guess is Sombra. I know is very unlikely but those crystals makes me think of Sombrero Sombra.
i bet its discord
just here as a decoration at his point. Should be this
It could possibly be sombra... but the distinct lack of stairs makes me doubt it somehow....
I bet its him!
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Nah
but srsly Sombra or some villains from previous generations
I'm thinking it's the Nightmare. The crystals at first made me think of Sombra, but blue isn't really his color.
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True but chrysalis called Luna metally corrupted why would she say that if nightmare was her partner?
2765664 That's why I called it the Nightmare instead of Nightmare Moon. Chrysalis is allying herself with the corrupter, not the corrupted.
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I suppose there is a comping cas for both nightmare and sombra.
But the crystals seem to scream sombra for me
2765732 But thats the thing, Sombra's energy isn't blue, it's black. And then there's this:
If she's talking about when she got booted from the wedding, then she definitely isn't talking about Sombra because he was trapped in a glacier at that time.
I would say sombra but when he escaped he just yelled CRYSTALS over and over again that dus not make a master-mind or not whatever may be blueblood..................pffffff hahahaha no not blueblood he's a idiot I hope he gets kill or something so it's Nightmare.
STOP, PUTTING, IN, SO, MANY, COMMA'S,! IT'S, REA,LLY, ANN,,OYI,NG ,,!!,!,,!!!
Okay, now that THAT is out of my system... This story has been steadily, albeit slowly, decreasing in readability. It has gotten harder and harder to comprehend what is happening from one scene to the next, and this last scene:
1. came out of nowhere, with no buildup, no explanation for Alfred or Chrysalis' actions
2. Guessing who the mysterious benefactor is is pointless, as no one in the series uses flashing mist, meaning it's either an OC (In which case, how would we possibly be able to guess something that exists only in your head?) or you have altered another villain from their Modus Operandi (In which case, HOW WOULD WE POSSIBLY BE ABLE TO GUESS SOMETHING THAT ONLY EXISTS IN YOUR HEAD?!)
3.Camo is really dragging the story down. He injects grim slapstick humor into any situation, warranted or not, exists only to hold the Shining/Spike/Big Mac party back whilst Chrysalis and Twilight are alone with each other, keeps pulling the focus away from the plot, his scenes aren't much more than filler, his whole 'do anything and get away with it' attitude just screams 'Gary Stu', the entire 'water full of iron' thing was damn near impossible to read on account of it being complete bullshit he pulled out of nowhere, and on account of the grammar steadily decreasing. All this, piled on top of the fact that he seems like he's from a completely different story, from a completely different genre, FROM A COMPLETELY DIFFERENT AUTHOR, makes Camo seem so jarringly out of place that I don't wish to continue reading if he remains in the story.
I originally loved this story. Showing how something like being raped and forcibly turned into something you despise doesn't have to destroy YOU is an amazingly daring concept, and showing how Twilight is loved and trusted by her friends, yet shunned by the community, really tugs at the heartstrings. The struggle to get Celestia to hear her was a very powerful scene, but you've turned this once-great story into a piece of crap, honestly. I'm not trying to be mean, but you should take a long, hard look at the last three chapters, then look at the first one. get someone who isn't a fan of your work, but is still willing to help you, to look at it with you and help improve your grammar and flow of ideas, because A Change In Harmony has some pretty good ideas, it just needs a lot of TLC.
Oh c'mon people: Mist, cold, evil, it's obviously the Windigo. Also, completely agree with 2766544 . This OC is getting really annoying. yes his antics are crazy, but I really want to see more of the development between Twilight and the hive. All of this "Camo does something crazy and the cast puts up with it" just annoys the hell out of me. Also, I know we've already suspended the disbelief of "species shift through insemination", but really, glue that melts things? Give me a break.
This, just got interesting.
2766985 You do realize a large portion of glues, work by causing a chemical reaction that melts the parts together, especially plastic glues, And even if they didn't, a substance that is both sticky enough to function as an adhesive and caustic enough to melt flesh is not beyond the realm of reality, let alone a fantasy world with talking ponies.
Sombra?
kulekitsune doesn't mince words. That is someone you should listen to. Everything said in that post is something to consider. While I'm not as close to quitting this story as kulekitsune is, I do agree with what was said.
With Camo, I understand the need for comic relief, but his is much too excessive. He's like Pinkie Pie times three. If nothing else, his eccentricities need to be toned down significantly.
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I know how glue works, and you've already proven my point. Glue bonds things right at the grain boundaries, on a molecular level. It is one thing to say its glue, and another thing entirely to say that it eats through stone and flesh faster than industrial grade acid (ok, maybe a bit of an exageration, but you know what I mean). Maybe if pinkie had done it, I could have put up with it, but as it is, I've had far too much of this OC and his antics to put up with it.
2767731 yeah I have the same hunch that it's Sombra
2766544 Time and time again, there are other like you. Brilliant, smart, eloquent, better people than myself... But honestly, blind. Grammar can be fixed, just like the story line to this. Why did Camo go there? Who is this new villain? (Not an OC, I promise.) And Camo, dear little Camo... Yes, he makes no sense, but he does it for himself. Chrysalis isn't the only one hiding things.
And don't worry about this little tale, I promise it wont get stale.
Grogar?
Stolen artwork! Please report it!
Original can be found here: http://sakuyamon.deviantart.com/art/Changeling-Twilight-Sparkle-Element-of-Curses-328380939
2911693 Nope. I got this off yahoo images. And that one you posted the link to, has no black background.
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Whether the pic have a black background or not do not matter. It got a black background because of how the person who originally stole it saved it.
Where you got it from do not matter either, if you use it without the artists consent, it is theft.
2912198 And yet, why are you bothering me about one picture? I get all the things from online. Can't we just ignore it and go back to reading and writing?
2912198 Well, how was I supposed to know it was stolen? It's not my fault the artist couldn't keep track of his artwork.
I'm kidding, I'm making my own right now. By the way, do you have any tips for making changeling eyes? That seems to be a problem for me, for some reason. Or do you think it would be better without eyes?
3104390 Thank you. and, Celestia hasn't really stepped up to the plate with defending her country, has she?Didn't help when Spike was destroying the town, didn't help with the alicorn amulet, she didn't do anything physically to help with Discord, or his reformation, and she certainly didn't d anything when Nightmare Moon showed up.
And Shining armor... Considering who he was marrying, how, how in any moment of clarity could he not realize his fiance wasn't actually there? I agree with you, Gustauve, for helping point out the facts.
Boy howdy did Twilight grow some inexplicable testicles.