Fluttershy is out collecting herbs for medicine when she's sidetracked by a massive explosion that drags a superhero into Equestria.
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Aegis Steelshield
Just a city boy, trying to write some pony fiction. What's so wrong about that?
Aegis Steelshield
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Hmm interesting.
I have no idea who this super hero is, Flash maybe?
2480397 nope, it's just chuck testa
hmm, i'll favourite this for now and judge wether or not it's worth it when the next chapter comes out
i like were it going next chapter
lololol
Soooo, you made this guy up? He sounds kinda like Flash
2494524 I was inspired by a few heroes, including Flash. But trust me, even at top speed, Flash would run circles around Nighthawk.
I like this... sounds like you got some Deadpool, Flash, and maybe a bit Hulk? Anyhow, this a nice story. definitely keeping track of this one!
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Those are three of the big ones, but Batman and Superman are another two.
Along with a bit of Saint George (Ex-Heroes).
2558504 Ahh, gotcha, you're good at writing, every time I see someone writing like you, I push myself harder. so *hats* for you good sir.
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That's the nicest thing anyone's every said about this story.
2558747 Really? I'd expect you to get praise, you're good at the style you do. and if this was fleshed out like a true novel I could see it being rather popular with people interested in this kinda thing. I personally really like it.
2558809 People almost never comment, that's why Lady Rarity, my other fic, went so long without an update. I just thought it wasn't any good.
2558980 after reading the first two chapters of it... I like it too.
2559054 Awesome. I actually posted the new chapter yesterday, and earlier submitted it to EQD.
2559063 I hope it get's accepted!
2559073 I hope so too. Getting on EQD is like winding up on the news.
2559123 Yeah, Personally I don't like EQD but the people that do like it usually follow from it with the speed of angry hornets. so I hope many angry hornets find you. I swear I mean this in the nicest way possible
This had me laughing and imagining Twilight actually saying that and Rorschach saying the first part.
2559136
Thank you. Wait what? 
2561092 YES! YES MY PRETTIES SEEK AND DESTROY! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!
2563647
RAAN!
MIR!
TAH!
Get'em!
2563777 OHNOES!
2563789
Quick question, have you figured out when in the show the story is right now?
2563797 before season two but after season one?
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During Season 1. The chapter I'm typing in my other tab happens the night Boast Busters (the first Trixie episode) happens.
2563816 Awesome. people need to give Trixie some (mc)lovin.
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I think they punished the wrong pony in that episode. All Trixie did was tell a story, Snips and Snails let the Ursa into town. She's still a jerk though.
2563832 Well she didn't know the correct way to boast. She did it in a "I'm better than everyone, kiss my hooves and worship me as the new queen of your town." where a good boast is "Hey, I did this thing, and it's cool, wanna see something else that's cool? FIREWORKS!" y'know?
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You have me there. I'm glad they didn't make her a one off villain.
2563846 Yeah, and I'm glad they let her grow and learn from her mistakes.
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I had hoped Gilda would get the same treatment, but since she didn't sell well, they canned her. I like to think she went back home.
2563862 Or maybe she is out planning her revenge on those "Dweebs" that made her look like a fool. maybe she'll try to hurt Dash so that her dream is crushed and she won't have any friends anymore? They never really can a character if they're not inexplicably dead and there's no way around it.
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Valid point. Also, they're apparently making either another alicorn, or turning Luna pink. Blue doesn't sell as well.
2563878 I'd prefer just another Alicorn. Making Luna pink means they'd have to re animate NMM and all previous Luna's... so it's probably just new Alicorn. I mean ALicorns are fine, I don't think making new ones is so bad as long as they don't ruin where the show is with them. maybe this one is Princess of Dawn? being that Luna is midnight, Celestia, high noon and Twilight is... well twilight.
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It's possible they'll either handwave it, or hopefully, explain it as some sort of preexisting magic. Maybe delayed side effect of the Rainbow Blaster?
2563937 But... Honestly, Why would they do that when they could make profit off of people still buying Luna figures and then new figures aswell?
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Bronies who buy the toys would pay regardless. Or, at least I would.
2563988 I do love me some Luna, Celestia is awesome too though... Why not share the Sun and the Moon...?
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We could use Twilight as a buffer. After all, Twilight does come between night and day.
2564058 I thought of that just before you posted this... are you an 18th century peasant/commoner? they were well known for thought stealing...
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No, but I am thinking of how that sentence may of inspired a new clop story. That is, if I ever decided to try my hoof at clop.
2564081 Do a co-operate story? you do the story outline I do the down and dirty?
2564099
Story? In clop? What is this, the Neighties?
2564109 You know what I meant.
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I see no reason not to. The only reasons I don't try writing clop are that A) I suck at sex stuff, and B) I fear for my reputation as a writer.
2564126 Reputation? You mean that thing that I found dead and shriveled in my car when I started writing? Who needs that thing?
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Heh, good point. New chapter in 5... 4... 3... Fuck it! Now!
2564138 Oh goody!