While on my way to school with my little brother, a tragic car accident leaves me in the hospital gradually holding on for my dear life, next thing I know I'm falling.
Rated Teen for language and a little bit of sexual references
Chapters (7)
Bazing
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Your lucky Spectra aint around in this fic otherwise you would be fucked up by Dark-Red by now
2285594 well what would you do in my situation? seriously tho, I know you would cry
2286301
I wouldn't mind being away from my family and I'd make new friends so no. I'm not a crybaby.
2286339 think about it tho, it's different from being away from them it's never seeing them again, and I love my family lol, same with my friends (not gay)
2286358
Good point. Still, wouldn't cry
2286363 main difference between you and me, I love my family enough to cry for them haha
2286376
True dat, true dat
okay I edited it quite a bit
Its good,but it goes a little too far into detail.
2286969 haha first time I've heard someone say that to me, don't worry I'll try my hardest to make it better
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2287207 Thanks
hope you like it 
2287372 love it so far, keep it up
Mate, you should totally add Spectra
make this thing 21% cooler and 15% more complicated 
Finally, a human character that doesn't take the ponies bullshit.
I can get onboard with this.
You know sometimes when I jump off story's I feel as if I CRAM EVERYTHING Into one and use it as a big story
Sorry for the long feed back bro but......
Good job on your first story and you got 14 likes!
And 4 followers!
Good job!
YO GO JULIAN! and btw I have a suggestion Bazing. Have Celestia scry his memories of him in the car accident, and him in the human hospital with his family and have Celestia show it to the main 6, i would like to see their reactions.
And btw MOAR CHAPTERS PLEASE
2295742don't worry, I will
2295744 thanks for the support
2295125 Thanks man
well, OOC Celestia is OOC.
2303640 sorry, I'll try to change it
Celestia's not gonna like him
2311940 hehe no she won't XD
He gunna get raped
Hm.
I smashed a year 10 in year 8 once but thats the only fight ive been in my entire life
2367484 yeah that was the only fight for me as-well, and it FELT GOOD!
2367490
Mine hurt
2367493
only a little 
2367972 haha, means the hospital
I've only read this prologue so far. It is pretty good, story wise, but grammar and punctuation could use an overhaul. It is occasionally difficult to read because of this.
2377495
I agree. Needs an editor. Stat
But I agree when you say its a good story as well
2387303 yeah I suppose, anyone interested?
2387313
Prince Solstice, my old editor, might lend a hoof
2387316 haha hoof, wicked ask him? or want me to?
2387332
Ill ask him
Although be warned, he can be harsh
2387337 haha I don't care, if it's harsh like, picks every little bit up, it's all good
2387345
Okay. he's an american though so he wont respond for a while
2387350 yeah, just hope he doesn't comment on my spelling, considering I'm Aussie ya know?
2387363
He probably might
Dont take anything he says too personally, though. He's known for being an asshole
2387365 dw, I know how to deal with assholes
nah, but I won't
2387379
Heres one of his reviews
Here ya go, mate
2387380 I killed Fluttershy? jesus...
2387393
Yeah, its a troll fic
2387396 that was fucking so funny!
NOT HIATUS!!!!!,
NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!
2420381
Be thankful it isn't cancelled