On a patrol through a flat, open area of desert, Tyler Odom and his squad find themselves caught in an ambush meant for the convoy they were unknowingly running point for. Before they could meet their end, however, a strange light envelopes their Humvee and flings them across the multiverse to land in the world of Twilight Sparkle and her friends. Can they adapt to this new world?
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this story just came out and it already has 1 down vote?! seriously did you just down vote it because its a HiE story?
Well i'm going to give this a read and then an honest opinion inkwell.
2475397 Actually I read this story a long time ago on fanfiction.net and i'm suprised to see it just get on here
Is there more of it somewhere else, cause it seems like a good story from what I have read so far.
Just finished reading chapter 10, and from what I've read so far, all I can say is...... AWESOME!
This definitely deserves more views! 
I approve of the pipsqueak and scootaloo
How the hell can you write a story so freaking fast?
2478117 I had already written it for Fanfiction.net. I have a profile there with the same name as this one and, well, this is actually my older story from there.
Though it is also the only one finished.
2478680
ow its already finished?
this is so cool!
That was a pretty darn good story man, just wish it could've been longer. Oh well, take this mustache; you've earned it.
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turn it into a museum? sorry. just ome things that i thought would be interesting to get answers for.
I have to agree. this is an awesome story!
I do wish there was more that happens after the battle ended. like farther along in his life.
here is your moostache!
also he mentions most of the big cities still had a lot of hate towards the humans. you didn't say how ponyville felt at the end. or what became of ink and her boyfriend. also what is going to happen to that ship?
2480312 I'm actually working on a sequel right now on FanFiction.net. I've only got one chapter done but I guess I can upload here.
I'll do it after work today.
2480620
yush!
2480620 MOAR NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
If you don't mind.
“Right. Humans, my species, lie and steal from one another. The few good souls are taken advantage of as the rest send humanity further into the spiral of self-extinction.”
Seriously.... no seriosly? You see ALL 7.2 billion people on this entire planet as all liers, stealers, and on a path to self-extinction. Man, that is some fucked up thinking right there.
One because it is obsured that one would think a species of 7 billion and counting could just up and die off, and two, you overgeneralized an entire species. Shame on you. Bad belifes will polute the soul. And I am pretty sure THAT is a bad beliefe. Now here, take a tootsie roll and be a good little filly. (See what I did there?)
“Of course not,” I continued, “and I hope you never do. My world is hell, Applejack. A good quote that I have always remembered is, 'The strong take what they want. The weak suffer what they must.'”
Man. Why does he keep trying to make the Earth sound like the worse place to be... like... ever? Anyways, I am glad those ponies didn't have their guts spread everywhere. That would certainly destroy their Equestrian citizenship for sure.
2489413 I did see what you did there.
I, personally, don't think every human is evil but if I was given the choice between staying on a slowly dying planet or going to a planet where humanity may start again with the knowledge of what not to do, I'd choose the second choice within a heartbeat.
Honestly? I never really paid attention to how many times I put an "anti-humanity" reference in there.
Probably should have paid attention that. My bad.
"The Pride" Eh?
Love It!
OK. Up till now I thought this would just be a wish fulfillment fantasy (Sigh.... Yes I am a squid and I would love to be a part of Mead Hall. That would be much better than the Gulf anyway.). However I am beginning to think that it will not just be that. Looking forward to the rest of the story.
Really liked this story.. Great job Sandstorm! :D Cant wait to read the sequel!
never ask if children have questions, that is like asking a baker if he has any bread
2489305 but in the end the overall truth is there
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I love It!
2610113 Dude, i ask a baker if he got bread... He start looking around for like 10 secs and then he just stop there and stare at the wall of 5 secs and he just face palm and i just said '' Really ? You got cake, pie, bagel, everything about baking... but no bread ?''
He just start laughing himself for like 2 mins, i just left and said '' ok... No bread''
When i come back to the table me and my friends just sat there they said in unison '' Where da BREAD !!'' I told them everything that just happen.
Why we wanted bread ? After everyone has finished there lunch Mostly everybody just put everything they hate from there lunch box into a small cup(Like coffee cup) and we just said '' 5 $ to who make a letuce, tomato, mushroom, bacon(The girl from the table don't like bacon... What a bitch, THAT BACON) banana(No, not just the half of it. ALL OF IT.) Maple syrup(Why he got maple syrup in the first place ?) Apple juice and lemonade. And EAT IT'' Abdo the guy to my left just get up and said ''Challenge accepted, If you go get bread'' and just sit back... We never made the sandwish. The janitor still hate us for leaving everything on the table. Happy halloween !
There should be a sequel to this story.
Loved the story.
OMG this is epic...Nice job man this story is pretty amazing..
GOOD JOB MAN AMAZING ABSOLUTELY AMAZING
That escalated quickly
Best line ever
u fkin kiding me
#spying is wrong
Welcome to... The pride! Haha!
... The ending was adorable yet sad... I LOVE IT!
Amazing so far. Loving this!
You hit me in the feels with that ending here bro
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God damn i'm glad i found this story.
This is kind of stupid a world without suffering and war would be terrible sometimes it's good to fight for what you believe in and without sadness you could not be happy
Why are they trying to stabilize him still and how is he fine if he has no pulse. I'm pretty sure he's dead.
I'm a brony too😀
Gotta love them sexual jokes
i'm just imagining tucker saying "bow-chicka bow-wow"