1191280 Ya.

Rip von Winkle?

1145819 Well i have red the first three chapter and it good but i think it need more thing, because it rushed a little here and there. Like when the story start, Grievous was in space and 20 words later it in equestria... Maybe try adding like Near 'add planet' General Grievous was losing a battles from general 'add a jedi or even a OC'
Add more details and it should be good.

Thanks for the favorite on my story Fallen From The Stars. What do you like about it?

1133101 Oh...
Thank you.