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Agroth the warrior is almost at the end of his journey in Lordran, but when he and his comrades are killed by one of the Lords, they are teleported to a different bonfire. They find a bridge leading to a strange land full of ponies! They still fear the Darkwraiths in this new land, and now try their hardest to protect something they have never had before, something very worth defending: their friendships with these ponies.
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was better, at doing same ting, at least in my opinion. yours seems kinda rushed. Good luck writing anyhow.
2522087 Thanks for that, constructive criticism is always welcome. I'll try to make the stroy seem a little less rushed in the future. Thanks for reading and for helping me to improve my story!
Hopefully, this story will not die like the rest, it is related to my current interests and I wish to explore the views on Dark Souls from others points of view, as well as Ponies.
2538877 Cool, both are really interesting and I feel they can fit well together if done right. This story will probably make a bit more sense if you're into the Dark Souls lore or the main story at least. Hope you enjoy it, I plan to upload the next couple of chapters soon.
My guess is that The Abyss is a dark and scary pit of which I probably won't be able to jump into for fear of what's at the bottom.
PRETTY SPEEDY. I'm not confused or angry though, it's just getting started, the conversations are quick but atleast they explain things.
I like dark souls crossovers. Do continue.
2539318 Haha, yeah. The Abyss is not a fun place. It's just pure black and darkness with four giant monsters in it. You need a ring to live down there, even if you're only gonna be there for a little while. And about the rushed feeling of the story, I am aware. I'll try not to write like that in future chapters. But I am already about 21 chapters into the story. I'm just updating them in moderation.
I'd gladly enjoy should you post it
I love this story! I demand to see more!!!!!
I DEMAND TO SEE MORE!!!!!!!! THIS STORY ROCKS!!!!!
Fluttershy kicked him? SOUNDS OOC TO ME, SHE WOULD BE HELPING TO KEEP THE OTHERS UP.
Well, that sounded like a typical bs Dark Souls fight to me, atleast it ended with the invader getting massacred.
Ornstein and Fatty Fat FatsMcgee was one of the easiest fights in Dark Souls loool, has anyone played World of Warcraft before hmmm? You must kite multiple enemies so that they can't hit you altogether, and you kill them off one at a time until one remains, you absorb and avoid as many of their attacks as you can while waiting for an opening, then you strike.
HEY, YOU'RE MOVING TOO FAST, STAHP!
This is a speed run to see how fast you can write a story without it being a complete failure and doing good enough to gain some interest without much hate at all.
He wore a mask that made him unable to see, for no reason at all? I can't see the point in that, it's so confusing that it's funny.
Unless he's level 731, I can only see this ending badly, I have yet to have a good time in Dark Souls... it's only death after death without achieving or acquiring new items.... atleast for me, playing with the same f'ing gear for like 50 hours straight and i've only gotten like 70 hours played time. This is after starting new game plus.
2584938 Ok, in his defense, he does gear himself up better to fight a Darkwraith (i.e. he stops using the fu**ing zweihander) and keep in mind it's supposed to show you A) How cocky Raymond is and B) That nobody should piss off Agroth. Ever. Just keep that in mind when Chapter 11 gets uploaded.
2585164 Yes sir, i'll keep that in mind, sir.
Now that I think of the ending of chapter 8, he pulled out Smough's hammer... i'm missing out on alot of gear. Just Astora's Straight Sword and Havel's Armor forever.
2541304 I have a dark souls crossover as well. Maybe we can help each other out? I like your story.
2584912 You can't kill them by yourself!
Annihilated.
2620027 Kill Ornstein and FatsMcgee? No, they are easy alone.... i'd say they're the easiest bosses as long as you have a greatshield and decent stamina.
Took a while to kill that demon eh...
2620525 one word, Pinwheel. That is all
2659238 Oh yeah... who remembers that guy?
Shit just got serious
No Raymond!!!
The story is awesome so far!
Dark Souls is so much better than Skyrim...talk about best game ever! Also, you know you can get into New London though that giant door with the drakes in front, but the easiest way is from firelight I, but jumping down a ledge to the right after the first wave of ghosts. 
2539318 Hell yeah! The Abyss is a bitch...
3137535 EVERYBODY LOVES RAYMOND!
I have really been enjoying this... Since I am a HUGE fan of DS myself.
Work on it as long as you need to. At least you upload something right?
3534889 Well, I try to keep people entertained while I work on the SAME PART of the story. I just don't want readers to get bored with this story.
Whelp, I've read a bit and it seems almost decent. I've never played Dark Souls, but I love hearing about the mechanics and lore that you've implemented. That said, this story to me seems to be a Dark Souls fanfiction that also happens to have some ponies in the background which don't really matter, as opposed to a true crossover. They're so undetailed and underutilized that they almost feel unnecessary. The dialogue with some of them practically made me forget they were in the scene immediately after they spout their 3 word introduction lines, as though their existence is soley for exposition. A bit OOC, but what I really think you're lacking is dialogue descriptors and detail to setting. Keep it up.
Not 100% sure if I want to finish this story anymore, I just can't think of what to write no matter how much I try. It's really bugging me that I haven't been able to write the same stupid thing for such a long time now and I'm just not sure if I can complete this story anymore.
Wow. Great story :D Just hope it gets finished. I could help with ideas if you are desperate for help (should only be a laat resort though. I sometimes get carried away :P)
3958053 Thanks for the offer, I'll keep that in mind
Ok, so I have finally finished this story. Only a little more than a year, and I also have a sequel in mind! I promise to edit this so it's not in "Great Wall of Text" format, I'll do that with the next one too.
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Step One: seperate them via THE WALL
Step Two: Kill Smough
Step Three: Hug The Legs Of Mega-Orenstien And Attack Him.
Step Four: ???
Step Five: Profit
awww they died!
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Still have a sequel in mind though (hopefully to be better written, better formatted, and updated more regularly)
5880483 will it be dark souls 2 related?
5881704 I think so but not sure yet, not 100% sure what I wanna do but I think it will be at least a little bit
This story was amazing but I only have one thing to ask of you. Would you possibly make an alternate ending where they walk away from the fire and return to equestria? I'm willing to help if you wish as I am going to be writing my own stories soon.
Uh, so far the story is moving at quite the pace to be honest.
I'm pretty sure that an undead wouldn't even be able to remember their life before they became inflicted with the curse, the closest thing that they could remember would be where they hailed from, going as far as to say that an undead remembers their parents is stretching it a little too far.