• Member Since 9th Apr, 2013
  • offline last seen Jan 9th, 2021

Demonfire463


T

Spartan Anderson awakens in an escape pod with no memory of the time recently before the crash. Applejack takes him in and introduces him to the Mane Six. He tries to get back to the UNSC Infinity, along the way he must defend himself and his friends from Covenant soldiers and other dangers. Will he ever get back to the UNSC? Or will he spend the rest of his days in the peaceful land of Equestria?

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 12 )

Protip on the short description: to "fend off" is to "repel" something. One does not "fend himself off" from enemies.

Also, upvote because your first vote should be a good one! Even if I didn't read a word! :twilightblush:

4.5/10: Could be better / Lacking

Is this humanized and why does he not question the names.?

Master chiefs actuall name is John and his tag is Sierra-117 sorry but that needs to be adjusted

2794511 I know, this isn't John, this is an entirely different Spartan.

okay, first things first... its a good thing his superiors are no where in sight, 'cause he would have been marshaled for breaking standard Spartan protocol... then again, since these are human ponies, i guess i can make an exception, but still Spartan's are only allowed to say their rank and designation, not their names.
still, i'll continue to read this, to see what will happen next.
hope to see more soon.

Ace out:rainbowdetermined2:

Woah. Didnt catch or remember 'humanized', add to the tags maybe?

A little random, but, it's a great chapter.

Great story, keep it up mate!

The formalities were a bit much, but dude keep em comin!:pinkiehappy:

Ok, so Mr. bad guy better not hurt Fluttershy... creepy prick.

Sorry I haven't uploaded Chapter 7 yet everyone, I hit a wall of writer's block. I promise to get it up right after I finish editing and writing it! Sorry for the delay, what do you all think so far?

Login or register to comment