Page generated in 0.045 seconds
Total duration
721 users online
1,246,452 hits today, 2,658,435 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Sorry for the delay guys. I ended splitting the chapter in two, so the next one is probably going to be just as difficult to write as this one was. On the positive side, I've pretty much given up with Neverwinter (I've never seen pay to win so blatant and expensive) and while Ridiculous Fishing is great fun, I was pretty much done with it after a day. I'm not into collecting hats.
On a related topic, what do you kind readers think about chapter length and content? I'm trying to keep each one 4-5k, roughly - is that too long, too short? Both the spanking and the scene at the river could easily have been expanded more and I deliberately cut them short. Am I overdoing it on the clop? Too focussed on weird stuff? Should I try and make it more vanilla?
All feedback is welcome, as always.
How could you ever overdo it on the clop, there is never enough Twi-Luna clop.. :P
On a more serious note I think you are taking quite a fun turn with this story, there is a nice piece of lore behind it and.. Twiluna whats not to love about Weird stuff Vs vanilla, I personally like a story that is a bit more.. out there and not plain.. Also there is so much stuff out there that is so much weirder, you are not even close to overdoing it , keep up the good work ^^
Use a bit more description for the clop, and this would be great instead out merely "good".
2618814
Thanks for the feedback - I'll work on it.
2595851 2595757
Thanks guys - I think you're right, but I'm trying not to drive away my audience. I'll stick to trying to keep things different, without drifting too much into fetishism. A lot of my clop seems to be pretty hardcore at first pass, so I have to tone it down a lot.
Okay, sorry to announce another delay, but the next chapter is going to be at least another week. This time it's for a good reason - the fic is written, but I'm getting it proofread before posting it - thanks, Knight of Cerebus. Hopefully this will improve the quality of the work, and I can get some advice on a passage that I'm not 100% certain on.
I've started work on the chapter after next, so hopefully that won't take two weeks to get out.