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this may dound stupid but i love little twi more than the awesome cute clop scenes. love luna's anger contol issues.
if you kill, yes kill illusion or not she is a living fucking charecter, i will do horrible things.
somehow.
ill find a way.
So Luna's looking for a pet huh? How about a nine-tailed fox?
Borderlands 2 has also re-consumed my life right now. Mechromancer is the shit!
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I lost my little brother today to Borderlands 2, AGAIN! Damn you Summer Sale and all your cheap DLC. But I decided to finally buy Mirror's Edge and even playing just a little makes me want Mirror's Edge 2!
Nice chapter.
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Li'l Twi! NUUUUUUUU~!
Shower scene was...interesting.I approve of the use of shrink spells in this manner.
I'm going to have to reread the schoolroom scene again to figure out what look Luna is referring to,
I however am very sure about tabloid journalism. I am sure that you should ignore it, for it is nothing more than muckraking, such publications should be burned and tabloid journalists should be banished on sight.
I do hope those shadow phoenixes are real.
Cool chapter!
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Thanks . I did give warning in the comments that I was working on a shower scene.
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I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Your comments are, uh, noted.
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Twilight was looking for some options that were primarily non-sentinent, non-evil, immortal and nocturnal. Some of the options broke some of those rules, but the nine-tailed fox would probably break at least three. I am interested in any suggestions for candidates that I missed.
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I'm having a lot of fun with my Gunzerker, but I started True Vault Hunter mode with him and then reset him in normal mode to do the DLC. He's level 41 but his gear is level 35 at best. I may have to play a bit more to even him out.
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Thanks
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I tend to view tabloid journalism as a necessary evil. Just.
Library scene was just a comment that Twilight took the tests from Luna very seriously, even though they were at play.
2866434 god damnit i know how to read between the lines.
ima get some tisses and razorblades now.
2866434 Speaking of clop, you mentioned earlier that you would be dropping several of the more fetish-y scenes. I realize that some readers aren’t into those things, but would you consider posting them after the main story is done, like bonus chapters for the viewers who do want to read them? That way the ones who want to read the story without the relatively heavier fetishes could do so, and the ones who do want that still have that option.
You're working to put humor BACK into the story? That's implying it ever went away!
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Kind of you to say so, but I've been really unhappy with the quality of this chapter and the next one is coming out no better. I'll keep chipping away at it and hope that it starts to flow properly.
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Well, it'll get me through the first training missions, but I'm probably going to have to farm some of the early bosses to get something that will get me much further than that fire pirate captain.
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I'm thinking about it. Not decided yet either way.
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Mwahahahaha
2869222. do NOT kill little twily.she is the second best thing in this marvellous fic.
the first beibgthe pure weopons grade adoarablethat is your twiluna. i really dont think my poor heart could not take it.. i just,,,, she just,,, i mean please?????
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Well, the difference may not be entirely noticeable. I care a lot about the 'flow' of a story at the moment, and I don't like it to be broken down into a series of weakly linked scenes. The most recent chapter was very choppy, went on too long in some places and could have stood to be fleshed out a bit more in others.
The humour was largely incidental or accidental, where I prefer to it to be more pervasive. I'm working on that and have a long way to go.
As a comparison, the 'Escape from Canterlot' chapter was quick and fun to write. The main body took maybe an hour and half to get down and it didn't need too much revision. This chapter and the next one have very much been 'write a paragraph or two, give up and play a game'. Not much fun. More mistakes too.
Anyway, I'm glad you still like it.
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Hi FlutterDash7, thanks for the comments and compliments . You're not alone in your dislike for the dungeon scene - lost a reader or two over that part . Oh well, still learning.
From memory, you didn't miss much from skipping the rest of the chapter. Luna gave Twilight a 'novice dreamwalker certificate', but I don't think it will feature again.
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***Spoilers from here on ****
I really don't like putting 'spoilers' in my comments, but I should point out that this story doesn't have the 'dark', 'sad' or 'tragedy' tags. Hopefully form that you can conclude that adorable fillies are unlikely to suffer terrible fates. I'm not saying that having Li'l Twi fade away wouldn't have been an interesting opportunity to bring Twilight, Luna and Pinkie Pie together in grief, but that's really not the story I'm writing. Normally I wouldn't even mention it, but there are a couple of chapters to go before the Li'l Twi fading problem is fully resolved.
So, uh, spoilers: there will not be a threesome between Twilight, Luna and Pinkie in this story.
"I'm trying to get some humour back into the story and it just isn't working." (Authors Note)
I call BS. This is halarious.
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Thanks for saying that, but I see plenty of room for improvement. Glad you're enjoying it though.
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Me too. I much prefer a happy story to a sad one. I know it's a weakness in my writing style, not exploring the full range of emotions etc., but I prefer happy all the way.
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Thanks for the suggestion. The spell does get mentioned elsewhere and it'd be a pain to find every instance and rewrite it. If I were starting from scratch, I'd get rid of the spell, but as it stands, I'll just mostly ignore it. As Twilight really isn't crazy enough to try and munchkin every encounter, it should be fine.
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Reading a few chapters from the beginning i realized what you mean... but hey this only means the fun can be DOUBLED
Pressure on the words pretty sure
Hello.
Borderlands 2 is a lot of fun. I usually play as the siren. So I don't mind the delay, you enjoy your games. At max level yet?
Sorry it took me so long to get back to your fan fic, Ive been working on ‘Fall of the Rising’ and have been having fun with the TwiLuna in it. (That story of mine is also a mature rated story... but I have taken quite a different look at Twilight and Luna's relationship.)
Your story has given me not only the idea for the Flutterdash story i’m writing where FS’s home meets a fire and Dash saves her (it will be fun writing the two pegasi on a rain cloud) but you have also given me a idea for a short one that would be targeted at derpy and Luna, set in the dream walking realty you set up (more or less… I like the idea a lot as u portray it) and with your permission, I would like to use that idea in my own story. The story would feature Flutterdasha and TwiLuna as well as a few other couples and be pretty much all set in ponies dreams as Derpy, Luna and maybe even Twilight keep watch and help guide ponies in their dreams. It would also include an experiment on what happens if other ponies who are not dream walkers meet in their dreams due to ponies like Luna setting it up.
…Your thoughts on it?
Anyway… now to your story.
It was fun reading two chapters of this in a sitting. Its great to be up to date again with your excellent fan fic. Did you ever think this story would hit so many words It's awesome, and I look forwad to seeing more.
The bath scene is pure awesomeness. You also gave me a few ideas there as well. Luna and her magic to shrink Twilight for fun was funny and the whole thing felt very slick and well written. And Spike... poor spike... It sounded like he wound up doing something with the CMC or was used by Rarity for something...
The pony playdate was short but sweet as was the more emotional scenes afterwards.
The story is still funny. So dont u worry about that.
But it is nice to see a more serious side to things too as their relatshunships settle and things develop more.
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Thanks FlutterDash7, your comments are always a pleasure to read.
I certainly have no objection to you borrowing any ideas from my fic for your own stories, this is a collaborative community and we all build off each other's work. The stories you suggest certainly sound interesting and worth a read.
I certainly didn't plan on the story getting this long - it was supposed to be a one-shot after all
I'm afraid the humour I'm looking for mainly eludes me, so I suspect that the rest of this story will have humour but not be great. I'm blaming my lack of sleep, which I'm in turn blaming on the stupid heat. Oh well, maybe I'll write better in winter.
2934735 Well I think your the only one to achieve a TwiLuna epic that is also a clop fic. So despite the humor not being totally what you want, I still think you've done pretty good so far, despite a few ...events... that put people like myself off.
Its winter over here. Great time for writing.
my goodness, I am a hardcore Twilestia shipper but This is better than most of those fics. also they dont have Lil' Twi. she just screams to be hugged all the time.
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Hi yuri-kun. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. I was actually rather worried when I first brought out Li'l Twi - I was worried that people would find her annoying - but most people seem to like her, which is a great relief.
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First time "commenter" long time reader. Wow you seem to have really done your research especially when it came to the pets. The amount of detail just makes the story that much more irresistible. The only thing I wish was that Luna had more of the "old English" style speech. It would make it a little harder to read at first, but as the story progressed it would have just fit her character so much better.
I also love the amount of love that seems to be "truly" shared between the two. It's not just a clopfic but nearly a graphic romance novel.
Love the story can't to see where it progresses.